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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2010 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter 15

“Couldn’t I?”

Can't wait til she sees him answer that question for real. Love them, and can't wait for the confrontation. Update soon!

Author's Response: Neither can I. ;) It's not all that far, just a few more updates, even less for one of them finding out the other is alive. More tomorrow. Thank you for the sweet review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2010 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

The way Spike is fighting he'll become a master-vamp soon. :)
Even if he only uses it as distraction, not to mourn Buffy. If he only knew...
Sounds as Buffy's dream turned into a Slayer's dream (back of her neck tingled in warning) but I don't think she saw this as a warning that he is a vamp. Loved the dream though.
Looking forward to more!
Have fun at your concert :)
And *beep me* when you're at LJ some day.

Author's Response: That was exactly one of the reasons for writing the fight scene. Killing an alpha dog of vampires in England bumps Spike's reputation up a couple fo notches, earning him respect and fear of the other demons. One can't exactly call him fledge after this. Yup, if he only knew... he will find out pretty soon and then... you'll see. :P Points for being clever as always! :D That wa the exact point Buffy's dream shifted from the memoery into Slayer dream, but yeah... she had no idea what it meant. I'm glad you liked it because I was thinking of including a dreamscape in the future chapters as well. Hee... the concert was simply amazing! :D Will do about the lj. ;) Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2010 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 15

Another great chapter. Spike's fighting was wonderful, and how he felt during and after the battle was so clear and emotional but still violent and in character. The pacing was great, too. I am so glad he's lashing out, and even at himself, rather than trying to forget Buffy.

At first, I thought we were getting a glimpse of the happy times and linking Buffy's thoughts to the hair tie Spike has during their caring make-out session. It was a beautiful scene, and then the interruption managed to be realistic. it was only then that I started to wonder if Buffy was having a Slayer dream.

Fantastic ending--I just can't wait for the truth to come out and how Buffy the Slayer and Spike the Vampire really feel towards each other. thanks for updating!

Author's Response: *blushes* You're very kind. It makes me so happy to know you got from the fight scene exactly what I wanted you to. It was both violent and reckless, and as you said emotional. I thought it would also serve well as a landmark for his reputation, establishing him as a dangerous vampire, even more so because of his heartbreak. Hee... pacing. I used to struggle with it a lot when I first started writing because I tend to go into descriptive mode, but thanks to my awesome betas, now I'm aware of avoiding it. ;) Right on the spot, Anna. :D It is actually both... the first part of the dream was a happy memory, which also allowed us to see William's affinity to take the tie out of Buffy's ahir, and his inability to defend her. This fact is a factor that fuels Spike's rage and relentless killing. But at the end of the dream, the memory shifted into the Slayer dream territory, not that Buffy was aware of it. ;) I'm happy you liked! We're very close to one fo them figuring it out. Thank you for the amazing review, Anna!!! :D

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