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Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2010 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 43

*squeal* Great chapter. Love how Buffy remained there for him. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hee... I love making you squeal. ;) She's definitely stubborn and protective of him which is exactly what Spike needs right now- for her to be there. Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2010 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 43

Spike can be so lucky that he has Buffy - and that Buffy is Buffy, not giving up.
But William's soul still seems to be an issue. One that Buffy will help with if she can.
I hope she can help. Spike is still not well yet. But maybe having Buffy there will help though at one point he needs to feed too.
Enjoyed - looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yup, Buffy's stubborness is proving to be a great asset right now. :) We know she never gives up on her loved ones and she's even more protective of Spike since she's already lost him once. Without a doubt, she'll do everything to save William's soul from hell's clutches. For now, she's there for him to lean which is exactly what he needs right now. I'm happy you enjoyed. Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2010 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 42

Spike is seeing ghosts? So it worked, the ritual. He's seeing the people he killed. Also, did you expect the twist with the Hermes' unfinished ritual and Spike's soul not being completely gone?? Nope - only when I read it I remembered it, forgot about it. Hope getting the soul (or the soul complete again) was the right thing to do.
Enjoyed the update - looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yup, it worked alright. And you're right on the other thing too... he is seeing the people he killed but more to that later. Don't worry though, it really was a good decision. I mean, what do you think would have happened if his soul stayed ripped in between two places? And what that other place might be, considering who Hermes is? It might not have magically fixed all Spike's problems-- quite the contrary-- but on the other hand, it was the right thing to do. I'm happy you enjoyed and thank you for the delightful review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2010 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 42

Enjoyed this update. Liked the twist, very clever! Can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully Spike will tell Buffy about his shiny new soul and his spectral visitors.

Author's Response: You get extra chocolate chip cookies (held by a naked Spike) for calling me clever. ;) Even if he refuses, we know Buffy would drag it out of him. Either way, it's confessions time. More on Sunday, and thank you for the awesome review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2010 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 42

Poor souled Spike. Got a lot to overcome. Hopefully now he will let her into help him. Update soon!

Author's Response: Don't you just want to cudde the poor guy? :( But he did a right thing and we'll see that eventually. Also, Buffy's there and she's not leaving him until he tells her what's going on. More on Sunday, and thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2010 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 42

He had to have some "goodness" left.. we know that. And now that he seems to almost faced his "demons" may be Buffy can help.. enjoyed

Author's Response: Yup, he retained that William part of him even though it's been torn between two places. He's in a pain right now, but with Buffy at his side... they can deal with it together. :) Thank you for the lovely review!!! :D

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2010 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter 41

I was scared what her reaction would be when he bit her and I am so glad she was so understanding I can only hope that this soul doesn't backfire.

Author's Response: BuffySee? No need to be scared. She accepts him as he is because she finally realizes how lucky she is to have him at all. But her being so understanding only makes it harder for Spike because he doesn't feel he deserves that. And about the soul... guess you'll have to wait and see. ;) Thank you for the very lovely review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2010 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter 41

I love that their passion is so uncontrolled. Even if they need to deal with that freedom of abandon, I'm glad that they are still trying. Too much good between them to stop trying. As if they ever could stay apart from each other. Loved the reunion with Faith, too. Those two have pretty exciting banter. It's not Spuffy, but I love it too. Update soon. Really enjoying this one.

Author's Response: Hee... and I love it that you love it! They pretty much can't have enough of each other and when passion takes over, all thoughts and concerns fly right out of the proverbial window. They have come this far, so no giving up for either of them. They'll brave this together. :) Because as you cleverly said, they can't stand apart from each other. It's so great to know you liked the Spike/Faith banter... I had quite fun writing it. They're just a great banter material, not as great as Spuffy of course, but good in a different way. ;) Update as soon as I get it betad, so let's hope it'll be this week yet. Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2010 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter 41

Poor Spike, fangy at the wrong time (well, in his mind anyways). Spike seems to have a Jimny Cricket inside him, even without the soul, too bad he doesn't see that.

Author's Response: Yup, the control slipped there for a while, but it's really not all that surprising considering the passion he and Buffy share. Spike's demon wanted to possess her completely. You're actually very right about that Jiminy Cricket thing... he does have it inside him, but he's too anxious to fix everything to see that. Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2010 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter 41

Poor Spike, fangy at the wrong time (well, in his mind anyways). Spike seems to have a Jimny Cricket inside him, even without the soul, to bad he doesn't see that.

Author's Response: Hee... thanks again! :D The site must have gone wonky. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2010 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 41

*gg* Fun, Spike teasing Faith. She couldn't see him good enough in the dark, huh?
Ah unexpected end of the chapter. My guess would be that the demon wants to claim Buffy that's why he bid her.
Not sure if he soul is the solution but looking forward to find out.

Author's Response: Hee... so I take it you enjoyed their interaction. ;) I had fun writing it since they're actually pretty similar in some ways. Since the light was off at first, all Faith could see was probably the shock of Spike's white radioactive (very sexy) hair. lol I like the way you think. Spike was freaked, yes, BUT... the demon in him is corresponding to Spike so it wants to possess Buffy, not kill her. Spike is afraid of unintentionally hurting her though. Hence the soul, which he sees as the answer to everything. But is it really? Guess we'll see. ;) Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2010 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter 40

Poor Sweet Spike, not quite a man, not quite a vampire. Love his desire to belong. Wonder how he'll achieve it. And Faith has confessed her new found strength to Buffy. Wonder when we'll figure what that's all about. Just love it. Update soon!

Author's Response: I always felt Spike was torn between the two worlds since he fell in love with Buffy on the show and I couldn't help but incorporate it here, though in a bit different circumstances. You'll see how he achieves it soon. ;) Faith has confessed indeed and there were actually some bits and pieces before that showed she was a potential. :) But it's the potion Spike injected that caused her current condition. I love it that you love it, thank you or the awesome review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2010 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter 40

good chapter. I loved the line he wanted to be a man with a demon inside, not the other way around--great line!

Author's Response: I'm happy you think so. :) And pointing out a line that you liked is a guranteed way to make me feel mushy. That line pretty much sums up why Spike is doing what he's doing, so it's awesome you noticed it. Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2010 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 40

Wow Spike would do a lot for Buffy. That ritual doesn't sound pleasant. More points for Spike.

So Faith confessed. Yeah that could mean more fighting power, longer living slayers. Spike will take care of this anyway. But second - yeah, Spike is different even without a soul. I think with time he would get stronger than the demon.
Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Nope, not pleasant at all, but you know those Middle Ages people... they like the gore. :D I think. But we already know there's not a thing Spike wouldn't do for Buffy. However, it's just not about her either. Two slayers mean twice as many dead demons and they can watch each other's backs. It's a win-win! I agree with you 100% on the Spike situation. But Buffy is mortal (as far as we know) so he can't risk trying to learn control his instincts, which would probably take decades. We'll see how it pans out but either way, Spike will remain Spike. :) Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2010 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 39

The beginnings of the search for Williams soul, love that idea. And quick return of Faith's snark. Delightful. Wonder indeed what that light meant. Awesome chapter. Forever ready for more. Update soon!

Author's Response: There might be a bit of an unexpectd revelation at the end of his search. Can't tell you more! But you don't know how great it is to hear you love the idea. :) Faith's snark, I enjoy writing immensely. And eventually both Buffy and Giles will find out about what happened to her. About the light... it was violet. Remember what colour was the potion Spike injected into Faith's bloodstream? ;) Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2010 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 39

LOL poor Buffy lost her keys? Not the best day today for her. :)
Giles too the truth rather well, I feared worse.
But Faith is well, that's good. Even if life will change a bit, being now the slayer (even if she helped before).
Unexpected twist at the end - didn't expect Spike to ask for this.
Enjoyed + looking forward to more.

Author's Response: That's what you get for losing the pants as well. *grins* That was probably the best part, then the things went a bit off the course. But as you said, it could have been worse. Giles took it rather well... he's a bit more open-minded than in canon since there was no Angelus to kill his girlfriend. Faith will have to adjust slightly to the new power she has, but don't worry... she won't go all crazy and evil. It was pretty impulsive of Spike. ;) We'll see where it will lead him. I'm happy you enjoyed and thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2010 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 39

Really enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad Giles wasn't as adamant about Buffy being with Spike as Joss' version. Can't wait to see what is in store for Faith and a possibly leashed Spike.

Author's Response: This Giles is a more accepting and lenient since there was no Angelus to kill his girlfriend.. that's got to built a serious prejudice and hatred. Without that, he can be more open-minded. Spike will actually get to meet Faith without Buffy present and I think you'll liek that. And what's in the store for him indeed. You'll see. ;) Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2010 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter 38

Enjoyed! Sweet and sexy. Can't wait till she gets home and see Giles...duh, duh, duhhhhhh! LOL

Author's Response: I'm happy you did! :) Wherever Spike is involved... sweet and sexy just comes naturally. Hee... oh yeah, Giles will definitely have something to say once Buffy gets home. Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2010 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter 38

Love their coming together. Hope things end well when she get's back to Giles. Hope he doesn't over react too much. Hope Faith is okay, too. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hee... they came together indeed. ;) We'll see whether, or how much, things will complicate in the future. You'll get to read Buffy and Giles talk in the next chapter and we'll also see what's up with Faith. Another update on Tuesday, but after Mabel gets back I'll be updating twice a week again. ;) Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2010 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 38

Awe, hot hot hot again :)
And what a way to wake up. So indeed it's past Buffy's curfew. So sweet when she told him she loved him (even if she worried him for a while with that).
Enjoyed the update - looking forward to Giles' reaction. And what Buffy will tell.

Author's Response: *blushes* So happy you think so. :D Well, Spike certainly didn't mind being awoken in such way. But Buffy couldn't help herself. Spike's utter sexyness even made her forget she was already supposed to be home. lol Not that we can blame her, right? ;) And she finally confessed! And things seemed to have worked out perfectly and they're finally together and... how long till something major happens? ;) I'm a tease. You'll get to see Buffy/Giles in the next chapter though. I think you might like what Buffy will say. Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2010 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 37

Every time!! I under-estimate your evilness every time!!! Please post the next chappie!! PLEASE!!! lol loved this one, keep up the fantastic writing!!

Author's Response: LOL! That just cracked me up. See? And I wasn't even being evil on purpose this time, so I think that counts as a point in my favour. Right?! :D Aah, but I do like it when you plead with me. Of course I'll update... on Tuesday. ;) Sorry for making you wait! Thank you for the awesomeness of you and your review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2010 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 37

That is one hell of a hot cliff hanger. If you feel like that chapter is lacking because your beta is on vacation, I can assure you that it does not. It flows, it sounds like them, and the desire to see them together is just bursting at the seams. I adore it. And we get to hear from Faith soon. Looking forward to it. Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm very glad you think so! :D I'm never too confident about writing hot scenes so it's good to know it didn't sound all silly. Your kind words are making me blush! There's more Spuffy to come in the next update so I hope you'll like it as well. And we'll get to see Faith soon, but not in the next chapter yet. I'll be updating more on Tuesday. Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2010 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter 37

Are you serious? You left off at the most crucial moment, Please don't take too long with the update!!!!!

Author's Response: I know and I'm sorry! It was getting too long... a lot longer than I thought it would be. ;) But there's more to come, even if you'll have to wait until Tuesday. Hope you'll like it. Thank you so much for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2010 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter 37

NOW, I KNOW YOUR EVIL!!!! lol!! Absolutely lovely and hot chapter!! Mabel will be proud when she reads this, I am certain. Can't wait till the next chapter!! Please, don't make me wait too long!

Author's Response: LMAO! And I wasn't even trying this time. The Spuffy loving got too long so I had to continue it in the next chapter. ;) I'm so glad you thought it was hot! I'm never sure how the smutty stuff comes out so it's good to know it wasn't lame. You'll have to wait until Tuesday for the next update... sorry! :( But there's a lot of Spuffy if that's any consolation. Thank you for the very delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2010 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 37

Uhoh! If Giies doesn't hear from Buffy before he visits Faith, and it turns out Faith has now been "activated" as a Slayer, are they gonna think Buffy died?

Author's Response: Hee... I love how clever you are. That is an excellent question! I don't want to spoil anything for you, but I can tell you that Giles will be pretty anxious to know what happened to Buffy and why she wasn't home all night. Faith has some suspicions as to what happened to her which will inevitably lead her to wonder 'why'. Hope you'll like the next chapter. Thank you for being sweet and reviewing!!! :D

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