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Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2010 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 31

Now the question is did he hear her or think it a dream or nothing. I don't see it as the nothing.

Author's Response: Yup, those are the options and I think I can tell you that me being evil, perhaps he really was asleep and didn't hear it. ;) I might have planned a different way for him to find out. You'll see. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2010 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter 31

He’d told her of course, that he’d missed her so much, thought she was dead, but… This was the first time she actually got it. Realized he’d been desperate to be close to her in any way he could.

For her, it was through his poems that she’d felt closer to William. Were they really all that different?

That just made my heart jump. Such a simple little gesture, finally showing her how he longed for her. How they both longed for each other. She will get around the vampire bit. She knows she loves him. Amazing moment. Can't wait for more. Can't wait til he figures out she loves him. Awesome chapter. Update soon.

Author's Response: Yay, I amde your heart jump! That me makes me feel giddy. :D I thought it should be a little thing rather than a grand gesture that convinced her what she believed in her heart- that William is inside Spike and that he really does love her. She might even start to like the vampire bit. ;) She's certainly attracted to that part of him. Let's hope nothing happens that will screw things up. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2010 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter 31

Awe :) When I've read that Buffy found Spike's (her) red hair tie I hoped finding this would show Buffy something (tell her / prove her). Good to see I wasn't wrong about it. Maybe it will help Buffy wo works things out, knowing (and believing now) Spike didn't forget her. They still dancing around each other for now....
I'll cross my fingers that you still can update twice a week. :)

Author's Response: Hee... it was a good coincidence that she'd found it, wasn't it? ;) Finding it and knowing he'd been carrying it around certainly confirmed what she thought- that there's still William inside Spike. So yup, you weren't wrong. :) Things are progressing between them and they just might get even closer soon. You're sweet for crossing your fingers, I really hope I'll be able to keep up! Thank you as always for the awesome review!!! :D

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2010 - 05:41 am Title: Chapter 30

Buffy is so vulnerable at this point and yet she nurtures William through her emotional pain. With all that has happened to them both, they are starting anew again with each other. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: You said it so nicely! :) Buffy has a lot going on in her life right now, but you know her... always helping the others. And William is in turn trying to be there for her emotionally. Things are progressing between them and the sparks are flying, let's hope it won't go awry. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2010 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 30

The way they are together, even when unsure, or with unbridled lust, it's just hard to imagine it any other way, despite how much they still have to work out. And I believe that he is right, the rest will work itself out, cause there is no going back. Those two surely would not have survived that dark evening so long ago if they had not become the super powered beings that they did, and those two separate twists of fate really did little more than seal the deal that they are meant to be together. Such a deep thought. Thanks for making me think it. Eagerly awaiting more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way. ;) They can't ignore the flying sparks even if the things between them aren't yet resolved. Both of them, especially Buffy, have opened up to the possibility of it working... definitey no going back now. Hee... glad I could inspire you to think deep! :) And excellent observation. Everything culminates back to the night when everything changed and if Buffy hadn't become the Slayer and Dru hadn't turned William... they would never have met again, so even if they had been dubbed by fate as mortal enemies... it was the only way for them to be together again. More soon, and thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2010 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 30

I love the sexual tension and how fiercely she fights it. Alas, it will be no use...this is Spike, and you can't fight his sinister attraction!

Author's Response: So good to know, since things between them will be getting more heated up soon, though no groiny action yet but you know Spike... can Buffy resist him? No.. duh. :D Sinsiter atraction indeed. LOL! We don't want her to fight it anyway. Thank you for the delicious review!!! ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2010 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 30

Hey, woman here, which means I'm always right. *gg*
Glad to see I'm right, Buffy loved the game face too.
Loved the spuffyness, that they had a little time together without interruptions from the world outside.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Well, it is true, isn't it? ;) Hee... lucky us women! Yup, Buffy found his vampire face pretty attractive, but then again, Spike would look hot even in a sack. :D There's more spuffyness coming, hope you don't mind... and things will be getting a little bit more heated bit by bit. Nothing groiny in the next update yet though. More soon and thank you for the delicious review!!! :)

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2010 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter 29

More Please!!!

Author's Response: More soon, promise. Thank you for being kind and reviewing!!! :)

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 07:18 am Title: Chapter 29

What a traumatic "no-win" scenario Buffy faced. With Darla dusted and Spike with Buffy, Drusilla must be crazier than ever! Hope that Spike is not faced with revulsion from Buffy because he is a demon. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: You're right! Even if she killed Darla, Buffy had a loss on her side as well even if it looked for a moment that everything would turn out just fine and without anybody being hurt. Drusilla got away and you'll get to see her reaction soon though not in the next chapter yet. The next update will be all about Buffy and Spike, so you'll get tosee Buffy's reaction to Spike's demon. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter 29

One down, one to go. Such a shame the harm that had to come to them, but Faith is a tough girl, I do hope she'll pull through. And the ways that they have each other. So very glad that William is there for her. Spike seems to be the one thing she'll need to defeat Dru. That girl will now be extra crazed and angry. I await that danger. Update soon.

Author's Response: Poor Buffy wanted to save them all, but the odds were against her and Faith paid the price. She did put up a fight though instead of asking Buffy to let go of Darla... she's tough to always choose a fight so being in a coma... you know she won;t give up. :) The situation with Dru is a bit complicated and I have to admit that I have a soft spot for her character. Maybe you'll be surprised by her reaction. Who knows? The next chapter will be based around the interaction between Buffy and Spike so I hope you'll like. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 29

See, I knew you would see it my way, well at least half way! LOL!! One down, one to go! But, I will say, I am glad that you didn't kill off Faith. Maybe I was a little hasty with suggesting to kill her off. Oh, I did notice you changed the button for your nomination, was it due to a little guilt with putting Faith in a coma? He he! Love your story, anticipating the next chapter!

Author's Response: *grins* Great minds think alike and all that, right? ;) In a situation like that it is only natural that someone gets hurt (or killed) and Buffy couldn't have saved them all... but I'm happy you liked that I didn't kill Faith. :D I gotta love your observation skills. LOL! Yup, I felt a bit guilty so I changed the button. Also, noticed nobody was using it so I thought I'd freshen it up a bit with a different one. :D Thank you for loving the story and leaving me the yummy review!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2010 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 29

I wondered who invited them in - so it was Giles; at last he can't blame Buffy for it.
*phew* I worried when Faith throat got slit that she was dead already but she is alive. Coma means there is a chance of waking up again.


Author's Response: Yup, it was indeed Giles but Drusilla had thralled so it wasn't really his fault. And he can't blame either as you said. I love your positivity... Faith is in a coma, but she's not dead yet, so there's always a chance. Although you never know what I'll do. ;) Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter 28

What a story! Has held me reading it since I started with chapter 1. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yay, you made me all smiley. I'm really happy you enjoyed the story so far! Things are going to go down in the next chapter so I hope you'll like that as well. Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 - 02:50 am Title: Chapter 28

So glad that she learned that William wasn't the perpetrator. He will be good for her, his sires, not so much. Hope she has it in her to do away with the crazy she-vamps. Buffy has a powerful motivator. Gotta know that she makes it in time. Update soon!

Author's Response: Even when Giles told her the news, deep down she didn;t want to believe it. Finding him in such a state convinced her of his innocence for sure... and got her quite pissed off at his sires. She's angry about them threatening Giles and Faith as well, but can she take on both of them without anyone she loves getting hurt or worse? You'll have to wait to find out. ;) More soon, promise. Thank you for the sweet review!!! :D

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 28

Poor, poor Spike. I stand by my earlier review, kill Darla and Dru, everyone else gets a reprieve...for now. I enjoyed how you made a simple act of sucking a finger seem erotic!

Author's Response: I know, poor Spike got quite a beating from them. Somehow I knew, you wouldn't change your mind about Dru and Darla. You're so bloodthirsty. LOL I'm glad you enjoyed the finger sucking... it was fun to write as well. ;) Thank you for the great review!!! :D

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2010 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh my god, I love this story!!! Please don't take long with another update!!!!

Author's Response: Hee... you're awesome! I'm happy you love the story so far, there's more to come soon. You know I wouldn't make you wait too long. ;) Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2010 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 28

Uh-huh... I was worried when Giles told about the killings (when Buffy thought it could be Spike) but his injuries proved that it wasn't him. Spike only taking blood from Buffy's finger and not more showed how much she can trust him.
But Faith now a bait for Buffy, her (Faith) and Giles maybe dead soon doesn't sound well. And Spike is still too weak. I wonder who let them in....
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: You know I couldn't have let her think he was just leading her on and lying for long. :) Finding him in such a state proved to her it wasn't Spike so there's at leats one good thing about him being tortured. Well, the only good thing probably. Unless you like incoherent Spike. ;) That sucking on her finger thing actually came to me as I thought of the epi Sleeper when Spike was all feral in the basement, the fledgings holding Buffy arms and he was about to bite her then licked the cut on her arm. Don't you worry too much about the trap... you know I won't do anything that would have you too upset with me. :) As to who let them in, you'll also find out in the next chapter. Thank you for the sweet review!!! :D

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 27

Spike should take a cue from Angel when Darla showed up in Sunnydale. Break out the crossbow ASAP!

Author's Response: LOL! Poor Spike got quite a shock finding them both at his flat and especially getting whacked by Dru... quite a dirty move on her part since Darla had distracted him with talking. We'll see what happens to him, the poor vamp. Thank you for the yummy review, Rose!!! :D

Reviewer: Behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2010 - 11:46 am Title: Chapter 27

Where to begin...kill off Faith for interrupting; kill off Buffy for resisting him so long; kill off Spike for not just ravishing her; and kill off Darla and Dru for just being them, all giggly and annoying. Wait...that only leave Giles, and who wants to read about his fear of tampons and his stuffyness. I trust you that the next chapter will be great, whomever you kill or not kill off. Impatiently waiting!

Author's Response: Hee... you're merciless, woman! :D You know, your solution reminds me a lot of the old greek literature like Antigone by Sophocles... he really did enjoy killing the characters off. lol But where would be the fun in reading only about stuffy old Giles, right? I agree with you. ;) And yes, when will Spike finally ravish stubborn Buffy?? He should totally get her drunk and seduce the pants off her! More soon, though nobody will die in the chapter... they might in the one after that *hint*. Thank you for the great review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2010 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter 27

Damn... Knew things were going to well for them. Glad that she let him into her sanctuary. Lovely of her to give him a chance. Wonder what will happen to Spike. He should be able to get out of this. Team up with his slayer and do what needs to be done to make a life. Update soon.

Author's Response: Well we can't have them getting too comfortable, can we? :P But at least Buffy took a big chance and gave him her trust by inviting him in. Spike is not exactly happy with Dru and Darla coming to visit now that he's getting closer to Buffy... and they're not happy with him chasing after the Slayer. Can't tell you what happens next, but I'll update soon so you won't have to wait too long to find out. ;) Thank you for the lovely review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2010 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 27

Awe :))
I didn't hope that Buffy would invite him in. It sounds good at the moment, Buffy tries to trust Spike. Too bad Faith did disturb them. ;))
Uh-huh... very bad, Dru and Darla are there now?
Would be better if they weren't. I won't be mad if you would kill them off. ;)

Author's Response: *grins* See? I pleasantly surprised you! Inviting Spike in was a big step for and a sign of her willigness to let him prove he can be good. God knows what would have happened if Faith didn't come knocking. ;) She's got the worst timing ever. The fact that Darla and Dru are there sure as hell doesn't bode well for Spike... or Buffy. Hee... where would be the fun without a conflict? ;) Thank you for the awesome review!!! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2010 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 27

Yes, please kill off Darla and Drusilla. Spike hasenough problems without addng them to the mix.

Author's Response: Hee... you're merciless! ;) Someone will die but I can't tell who it'll be yet. All I can tell you is that Buffy will have her hands full in the next chapter. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2010 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 26

Best cliff hanger! And hell yes!! Especially after he licks his bottom lip. :) And I love how flustered he makes her. She really is just fighting this for the sake of fighting. Can't wait til she figures out she doesn't want to. Absolutely awesome, and you must update soon!

Author's Response: I love leaving you hanging a bit! :D Hee... I so knew you would. The lip licking certainly is very irresistible, nobody can deny that. But Spike can do pretty much anything and it's either hot or adorable. Even Buffy can see the hotness of him, but as you cleverly pointed out... she's fighting for the sake of fighting. She's afraid of letting him in, both metaphorically and literally. But she's got nowhere to run now, does she? ;) More tomorrow! Thank you for the delicious review!!! :D

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2010 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter 26

LoL! I love this chappie. It has some cute moments especially that part where Buffy get more money from Giles.

Author's Response: *grins* And I love it that you love it! :D I enjoyed writing that part with Giles and Buffy immensely... poor flustered Watcher. Hee... Giles is not used to dealing with such things. Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2010 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter 26

I can't help but hops she invites him in.

Author's Response: Buffy's mind works in mysterious ways so who knows what she'll do? ;) Thank you for the lovely review!!! :)

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