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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2010 - 01:56 am Title: The Beast Below

Justin.. the father or brother he never had.. or maybe a warlock?

Author's Response: Thanks - like a brother

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 - 08:31 pm Title: The Beast Below

Enjoyed the interlude. :)
But they could get easily caught like when they were disturbed before. But it was hot.
Justin is a good friend it seems and loyal too. William could use the help; who knows when Wellington will try something again.

Author's Response: Thank you. Getting caught is half the fun for them. Justin and Wellington will definitely come into play in the future. Justin is based on someone I once knew.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 10:52 pm Title: The Beast Below

Interlude in the park was very hot, and I really enjoy Justin teaching William to fight, because we can see Spike emerging from him.
Here's the deal: you keep writing this, and we'll keep showering you in adoring reviews, okay? ;-)

Author's Response: thank you. That is exactly it. Instead of such a division between Spike and William, I wanted to show that they are quite alike. You got a deal! I enjoy hearing from everyone. I just got back from vacation so that's why the slow response.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 05:28 am Title: The Beast Below

William is evolving in all good ways and Justin sounds like a good friend who has his best interests to heart. Self defense is really a good balance to the intellectual part of William and since Buffy is his muse, he will soon be quite the man she deserves! Loved the passionate side of William in the park and Elizabeth should be proud that she has made him realize his manly potential. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: thank you. You picked up on all the concepts that I wanted to portray in their relationship as to his evolving. Victorian times were so oppressive and in canon Spike despised most of what his times stood for and hence his rebellion in his accent and the entire punk thing. That's essentially what I'm trying to show in William.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 04:11 am Title: The Beast Below

Love, love it all! I was a little surprised in the park, but then remember this is after the Victorian period.

Justin is a great friend and the believable details of his life are wonderful though subtle. I like the ideas behind the training and the thrills William is learning to enjoy, with Elisabeth and with Justin.

Author's Response: Thank you. This takes place a few years before William is turned. I'm so glad you like Justin and you are absolutely correct. Because of Justin and Elisabeth, her moreso, William is exploring different things and sides to his personality.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 03:27 am Title: The Beast Below

Nice to see William learning to fiight. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. This is all venturing towards Spike.

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