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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2010 - 02:04 am Title: Visionary

enjoyed.. even Heath..

Author's Response: Thanks - score 1 for an OC

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2010 - 09:58 am Title: Visionary

I liked this.

Author's Response: Thank you and I'm glad to hear from you.

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Date: 05/09/2010 - 12:11 am Title: Visionary

Yay, you're back! I really, really love the way you're handling the attitudes and climate of William's time, and their ill-fits with them.
And I also have a weak spot for that GooGoo Dolls song ;-).

Author's Response: Thank you. That's what i wanted to show to also better explain why Spike fit into modern times so well. Watch for more songs.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 08:28 pm Title: Visionary

Enjoyed the update :)
And what William told Heath. Elisabeth will be happy, whatever her guardians say.

Author's Response: Thank you. You can see the Spike backbone coming into play.

Reviewer: curly_kitty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 07:36 pm Title: Visionary

I like your take on 'William' and the way you made him a rebel at heart but still the shy quiet version from the shows. At least until he was corrupted by the fair maiden of course...

Author's Response: Thank you and welcome new reader. I love hearing from you all. That will all come into play when he is turned.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 06:23 pm Title: Visionary

Very glad this updated, and I love that Goo Goo Dolls song. William certainly is showing a confident attitude, and absolutely sure that what he and Elizabeth wants, he can make happen. They're so sweet and wonderful together, and I can't imagine how Buffy is going to react to constant supervision to keep them from celebrating their marriage early :) It's proper, and decided with good intentions, but still. I really like the glimpse into Heath we got this chapter.

Great chapter and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Anon. I'm always glad to hear from you. I think I have that song on everything that plays music from MP3 to the computer. Glad you like Heath - OCs always make me nervous. The other thing to keep her honest is a pregnancy scare even though she is convinced it can't happen. With William/Spike the temptation only can get worse. Hope you like the next.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 06:10 pm Title: Visionary

That was so sweet. I so want them to have some happiness before whatever awful thing is going to happen to them comes along!

Author's Response: Thank you. Well they have a year and a day.

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