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Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2010 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

wow - gotta say i was most surprised at xander's reaction to the buffy/spike thing. he was calm and rational and not in denial and still protective (although not in the normal neanderthal way). and dawn 'exists' early (for lack of a better word) ... hmmmm ... enjoying this very much and looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I love Xander for the most part. I think If he would have been a true friend to Buffy on the show things might have turned out much different. Also, I love messing with timelines.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Enjoyed the spuffyness. :)
Glad it went better than I feared. And Dawn is there now?
Hope you'll continue this one.

Author's Response: Yup Dawn is there now. I love to mess with timelines :)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'm so glad Joyce let Spike stay And the Scoobs are dealing, even tho Giles is not too happy. At least he knows Spike would never hurt Buffy. Too bad Dawn walked in on them. I think they should get a place of their own soon. Spike does have the treasure doesn't he?
And Angel should just GO already. He only wants her cause Spike has her now. He was perfectly fine in LA.

Great story. Plz post more soon. :)

Author's Response: I am glad you like it so far. Not too sure about using the amara treasure...guess we will have to see how it plays out ;)

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 5

Just when you'd think that things could not get any better, here comes Dawn and her timing to interrupt the sexcapades. Great chapter to wrap up the objections to Buffy and Spike mating. I think that now that Dawn is in the picture, Buffy and Spike should consider a place of their own with the treasure where the Gem of Amara was found. Cannot picture Spike working at a job, so why not invest the treasure to keep them financially in the black till they figure out what the future holds. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Great I dea bout the amara treasure, though I have seen it used in several fics now. I love Dawn, this one has been fun to write so far.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Their feelings developed very quickly and the Scoobies are supportive, but that is nice.

Author's Response: Yeah, at the time I started writing this I was all about the scoobies being supportive.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 5

Please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: I am glad you like it. I will be putting up a new chappie soon

Reviewer: maryperk Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 11:39 am Title: Chapter 5

How do I remember this? I only read it five, six, a bajillion times!!! Thank you for the repost!!!

Author's Response: HAHA I am glad you liked it. I didn't change too much. Look for a new chappie soon.

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