OMG!! This is pure hotness! I love it! The sex was amazing and the beginning was insanely hot.:) You're doing a great job..I wonder how long before feelings develop? :)

Love this... Ho-ly SHIT! A cock like that should be preceded by a drumroll. Or at the very least, a 'ta-dah!' LOL I'm such a perv, cause I've been imagining JM's cock since I saw the dailies of "Wrecked". Now those were hot! *damn you youtube, for taking them down*

Can't wait for more of this sexy story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I too, have been thinking about JM's cock since the "Wrecked" dailies, and that line is what I imagine it looks like. *happy sigh* What I can't have, I can at least joke about ;-)

There is no way this is your first fanfic. This is absolutely amazing! The description puts you right in the--erm--action and the dialogue is spot-on with the characters. And on top of it all, you have a delicious set-up. Hat's off to you because, as a fellow writer, I am jealous. Can't wait to see more. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I actually haven't written much of anything, much less fiction, in about ten years, and never fanfic. A lot of credit goes to my beta dusty273 for the polish :-).

*two cold showers later* Very hot! also love the line: "A cock like that should be preceded be a drum roll. Or at the very least, a ‘ta-dah!’" LOL!! Great chapter!


Author's Response: LOL, thank you! I was particularly proud of that one. It occurred to me as I was falling asleep one night, and I started giggling so much that I had to write it down so I wouldn't forget it. It's how I like to think JM would look nekkid.