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Reviewer: badbetsy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2010 - 04:56 am Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game

Enjoyed the turn of events. William understands her more than she knows. Hope this turns in their favor.

Author's Response: Heh. What can I say, I'm a sucker for a hopeful ending (now posted ;-)).

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2010 - 12:10 am Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game

I have no problem with people with excess wordage issues. I love the storhy and am very glad of this chapter mainly because I was trying to understand what would make her pay for something like this. It makes a lot more sense to me. By the way I wonder what happens to be people who break Rule 3. Rule 3 is stupid.

Author's Response: It's been a bit tricky balancing the smut and the plot, so I'm glad you enjoyed the exposition. And fortunately, some rules may be made to be broken ;-).

Author's Response: It's been a bit tricky balancing the smut and the plot, so I'm glad you enjoyed the exposition. And fortunately, some rules may be made to be broken ;-).

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2010 - 11:52 pm Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game

absolutely adorned! Break rule #3! Break it completely!!!!

Author's Response: So stomping on its itty bitty remains is what you're in favor of? So noted ;-). More soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2010 - 05:54 pm Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game

Hot again. :)
It was fun when Buffy wanted more, a date. And always forgot something in her luggage, taking the whole suitcase. *gg*
Not so good that they are being watched for falling a love; good idea to dine in the room. Maybe a break of a contract would mean being kicked off the island.
And I just loved Spike's speech - I think he helped Buffy a lot.
Enjoyed the update (and I love long chapters so no problem with that).

Author's Response: LMAO, thank you, because I seem to have a problem stopping a chapter once I've started (it's the getting started that's the hard part). I will admit, writing the dialogue was a bit cathartic ;-).

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2010 - 04:44 am Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game

Mmmm Total hotness. Me likey! And that island is so creepy, all the staff keeping tabs on people. I wonder if they have the rooms bugged? I'm glad Spike figured it out and they had a nice romantic "date" in their room.
Of course it looks like Spike is falling for Buffy. I hope they fall hard for each other and admit it. Poor Buffy her stupid ex made her feel like a freak. Jerk. It was probably Riley or Parker I guess.

Great chappie, can't wait for you to post more. :)

Author's Response: I'm trying not to make The Island too creepy while still staying within the parameters of the challenge. And yup, the ex was supposed to be Riley. Thank you so much for the kind words!

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