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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter 10

The timing and obliviousness of animals. It is a good thing he likes Dru, otherwise, that was a damn intense moment she broke. I so ache for both of them. Really seems like a good thing for them to share a bit of their pain and prove to each other that they are human. And that he has no reason to help Buffy other than Dawn. :) The wait may be killing all of us, but it does make the payoff so much sweeter. Truly amazing chapter. All of you characters are just so real, with the joy and the pain. I'm in awe. Hope your muse cranks out another chapter soon! Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and that the characters are ringing true. Chapter 11 is about halfway to done (thanks in large part to my awesome whip-cracking betas).

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2011 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 10

really enjoying this. please, please don't leave it as WIP!

Author's Response: I'm making every effort! Chapter 11 is in the works, and my betas are awesome at motivating me. Thanks!

Reviewer: Dragonfly_B Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2011 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter 10

I just discovered your story and I love it (I basically couldn't stop reading!). I seriously think you've written the sexiest human Spike ever! The characterization is so good. I hope you find time/inspiration to keep writing it! Thanks =)

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I'm so glad you found/like the story. I'm working on the next chapter ... my betas are awesome and keep me going. Reviews help, too! :) Thanks again.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2011 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 10

Mmmmh Buffy and Spike almost talked without getting in an argument / disagreement. (Before the dinner.)
It was good to see how well they got along when they were eating.
So Dawn was lying about the call she made to Buffy's work? So Buffy knows now that Dawn lies for time to time. Not sure if that will be a good thing in the future or if it will put more strain on them.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! We'll see how Dawn behaves in the future, I guess... :)

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2011 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter 10

I love nearly everything about this story, especially the characterizations and interactions between characters. Spike's richkid past is an excellent addition, as well as the room he refuses to let Dawn enter. The only thing I have a problem with are Spike's various piercings, but that's just my personal opinion. He is pretty punk in this story, I guess, but piercings anywhere other than ears are a big ew to me. I'm sad you ran out of chapters to post...

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking (most) of the story. :) Yeah, piercings aren't for everyone. Personally, I think they're kind of hot--though nothing I would ever do to myself again. I've started the next chapter and have some excellent betas who push me along when I get stuck. I'm aiming to post every two weeks or so; we'll see how it goes. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2011 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter 10

Ha ha ha - Dru is a snake, how appropriate!

Really enjoying this story and how you're keeping all the characters true to their character in a "all human" fic.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's great to hear the characters are staying true to the source material. I really do want a very canon feel to this, just without the supernatural.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2011 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

Please update as soon as you can. I like this story and I would like to read more.

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2011 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 10

This entire chapter made me tear up. I was seriously trying not to cry the entire time. I love this story; it's so genuine and beautiful with unforced emotion. Hope you are able to keep it going.

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much! Puddin set me a deadline, so that's always helpful. :) Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2011 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 10

An exchange of some personal info ... lowering that wall Buffy has erected and letting her know that Spike is not the jerk that lives next door. Both losing loved ones..
And Dru.. a snake? LOL oh, well.. almost a kiss to negate that lie Spike told..
enjoying..

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're liking it.

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