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Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2012 - 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 13


I adore this story, and punk-Spike, please update soon!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! I actually just finished chapter 14, and it's off with my betas. So I *will* update soon! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2012 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh, please update this story! I absolutely love the Spuffy dynamic and progression (UST is delicious), as well as their individual characterisations. You've also got Dawn down pat, with her bouts of teenage rebellion and maturity.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! The next chapter is underway. I apologize for being slow at this, but it's definitely still in progress.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2012 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 13

Sounds as if Dawn understands now how bad things are. Maybe they can work something out when Dawn behaves.

Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2012 - 09:07 am Title: Chapter 13

It is poetic and amazing the way he gets her to communicate through her violence, in a good way. And the emotion of the situation... I hope she can see how very amazing the guy she has in her court is, and how very amazing he doesn't really have to be. Sometimes it's worth letting them in... So powerful... and I totally remember those teenage days sitting, bawling my eyes out with and angsty song set on repeat. Not that my problems compared to Dawns, but the emotion of the moment and the irrationality of youth is perfectly captured. I look forward to more. The depth of your characters inspires awe. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad Dawn is coming across as believably angsty. I was one of those moody teens as well. :) I will be updating as soon as I can!

Reviewer: Angel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2012 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter 13

I don't know what Buffy's thinking. She shouldn't trust that guy. He's clearly evil.

Reviewer: Giles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2012 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter 13

*Moans in pleasure because he's having sex, forgets to type*

Reviewer: Riley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2012 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 13

I don't know what Buffy's doing. She shouldn't trust that guy. I think he's evil.

Reviewer: Dawn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2012 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 13

Fine! With all this stuff going on in my life and you go and end the chapter on Spike and Buffy! It's not like I matter! Who cares if I have to go live with strangers? Spike is giving Buffy Italian food and Dawn can just sit upstairs and cry herself to sleep while the author focuses on the people who REALLY matter!!! It's like you NEVER CARED ABOUT ME AT ALL!!!!!

The parts with me in it were kind of awesome. Ok, the parts with Spike and Buffy were kind of awesome too!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2012 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 13

je t'aime! This story is great! ^___^ Adore the way you write, and the details... perfect. Loved the break-down in the basement dojo, and i really liked that we got to se a bit more of Buffy before their mother died. Great character development

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: bikey88chic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2012 - 06:55 am Title: Chapter 13

Oh I love this chapter. I feel a little Spuffiness coming on......

Author's Response: Slowly but surely.... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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