That was a really great action sequence, you really had it down. I'm glad that, despite Buffy seeing some humanity in Spike, she is still fighting back and fighting to be free. I like her constantly thinking of a way out. I look forward to what happens next!

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! I think of myself as lacking in the action writing genre so the fact that I pulled off that scene no matter how short is a great compliment to me! And thankyou for the compliment about this Buffy, I'm trying to show the conflict, (which will just get more and more pronounced) between her growing complicated feelings for Spike and her baser needs for escape and freedom :)

And there I'd thought Buffy would make it, to escape. No such luck.
Hopefully things won't get too bad now.

Author's Response: Time will tell...thanx for reading! :)

Whoa! Making her strip off her clothes takes away most of her options for escape plus humiliate and terrify her all at once! Spike is angry and who knows where things go from here.

Author's Response: Originally I didn't have the Chapter ending there, now its seems like thats the only place I could end it, because it puts the reader in the exact same place Buffy is, wondering what his intentions are...