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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2011 - 07:01 pm Title: Pretend

Enjoyed the spuffyness - but it seems this will end soon if Spike gets what he wants. In order to protect Buffy? Maybe....

Author's Response: You may be right, check the next Chapter, just posted!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 - 05:27 am Title: Pretend

Glad for the update, can't wait to see what their future holds.

Author's Response: Thank you, hopefully an update will come soon :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 - 03:44 am Title: Pretend

"He finally had what he wanted, but in finally having it, he knew he had to give it up."

And in that moment he grew up so much. It's poetic, and sad, and so very genuine. I know there is more to come, and much more trauma to survive, but I look forward to what happens. How does Buffy Summers go back to her life and tell the world where she's been? And at this point, does what she really want include a world without him? Maybe they're pretending that they can be a normal couple, but can they be separate? I love the tension. So sorry you had computer trouble, but it's wonderful to have you back! Update soon!


Author's Response: Thank you, I've got really good feedback already from here and fanfic.net about this Chapter, its my favourite I've written so far I think so I'm really pleased...its going to be a challenge to write what happens next because all the questions you touched upon have to be answered you've hit the nail on the head, hopefully I'll get the time to sit and do the next Chapter justice very soon :)

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