Date: 08/16/2010 - 11:27 pm Title: One Girl…To Stand Alone…
Loved this chapter, again I mention to you the alcohol - awesome idea lol. I can't wait to see what else I get to read, looking forward to seeing how you're going to make this play out. Awesome job!
Author's Response: lol. i couldnt have done any of it without you lindsay, i cant take all the credit
Date: 08/16/2010 - 09:12 pm Title: One Girl…To Stand Alone…
really interesting - good novel story, love the way you brought D'Hoffryn in. looking forward to the next chapter - if this is your first fic, well done!
Author's Response: thank you so much =D
Date: 08/15/2010 - 07:14 pm Title: One Girl…To Stand Alone…
Lonely Buffy even if not alone. I'm glad to read she didn't get too much involved with the Immortal though both Buffy and Spike are in trouble now. Especially Buffy. Hope it won't come to the worst.
~ I love time travel stories, so I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: youll just have to keep reading to see what will happen
Date: 08/15/2010 - 11:25 am Title: One Girl…To Stand Alone…
A dark beginning and I find it a bit hard to belive that she's with the Immortal when she dislike him that much. Anyway the story is good and wellwritten, I want more.
Author's Response: she has to pretend for the people shes around. dont fret he'll be out of the picture soon enough, promise
Date: 08/14/2010 - 11:56 am Title: One Girl…To Stand Alone…
Awsome insight to Buffy after loosing Spike. Nasty Immortal cant wait till he gets his ass handed to him!
Author's Response: thanks love, he'll get whats coming to him
Date: 08/14/2010 - 02:54 am Title: One Girl…To Stand Alone…
Very poignant description of Buffy's feelings and reactions to the people who used to be her family in her new life. I hope the misunderstanding for Spike gets cleared up very soon, even if they have to go through a lot of pain and deal with a lot of enemies after.
I'm intrigued about how D'Hoffryn is going to come into play, and just where this story could go. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thank you =D youll see where he comes in in the next chapter
Date: 08/14/2010 - 12:36 am Title: One Girl…To Stand Alone…
First of all, and I can't stress this enough, this is Dominique's story and in no way mine - I'm just proofreading and happy to do it since this fic is absolutely fantastic, good job D!!! And congrats on posting your first chapter!
Author's Response: lol
I wouldn't have been able to do it without you Lindz. Thanks so much =D
Date: 08/13/2010 - 10:51 pm Title: One Girl…To Stand Alone…
Very nice beginning! And I'm so glad that you haven't had Buffy sleep with the creep. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: NEVER! hes a serious slime ball, and thanks I should be able to keep up a somewhat steady stream of chapters.