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Reviewer: westwingwolf Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2010 - 03:36 am Title: Prologue

I'm beginning to think this muse is not Spike as you implied, but rather Angel wearing contacts. No Spike would be this cruel to Buffy or himself.

No, but story wise, the twists are good. Just reader wise, it makes me sad.

Author's Response: Hi www! Trust me ... muse definately NOT Angel! But, I can see how you'd get that idea! He just really loves to make people squirm and cry and worry ... including me!! Just has that darn evil streak and he has to get through that before he can get to his happy place.... It's his Raison d'être ...

I really do love your reviews, despite my muse's ability to test everyone's patience! Have faith ... (I hope) he knows what he's doing ... :O

-P4S 2010.09.07

Reviewer: LisaV Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2010 - 05:57 am Title: Prologue

Thank you for fixing the summary. I would appriciate it if you can check yourself again in the recent page. For some reasons, your blank line is showing up as double lines, and your summary is STILL 2 or 3 times long compare to other fics.

Author's Response: Hi Lisa, Everytime I edit a story - the "system" doubles all my line breaks ... this happens on the summary or any chapter ... I've reported the problem and Pari knows about it, but ....?? ??? I'll give it another try ... see if I can at least get the extra lines out of the summary... Thanks, P4S 2010.08.29

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