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Reviewer: Onlyabrit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2015 - 01:16 am Title: An Introduction

This is a wonderful story. I love this Spike, wisdom and experience, as well as heart. Buffy very young though. I would love to see more fic's like this one. Very original plot.

Keep up the good work, looking forward to more of you stories in the future.

Reviewer: jackson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2011 - 03:49 am Title: An Introduction

Love your writing. Can't wait to read more of your work. Great first start!!!

Author's Response: thank you! well this has turned into a super long fic, but it is almost complete! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2010 - 01:23 pm Title: An Introduction

So Buffy is showing off for who ever is making the tinglies react.. Shameless.. LOL

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2010 - 11:49 pm Title: An Introduction

I am quite intrigued with this story but (whinge here) you seem to love the cliffies.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 11:46 pm Title: An Introduction

Saw you asked about a beta. If you have time to read a bit, I've collected some links regarding 'Beta' (and where to look for one) here.
A good definition what a beta can be is here. *quote the entry*: What the hell is a beta for, anyways? Some would say proofreader, some would say idea-bouncer, some as a check and balance to ensure proper characterization, and some would say collaboration. I would say that the ideal beta is a combination of all of these.
This is a good entry too.

Reviewer: Julia Le Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 10:54 pm Title: An Introduction

Congrats on posting your first story. I look forward to seeing just where you will take it.

Author's Response: thanks!! was wondering, do beta readers read it for you and make suggestions before its posted? and how do you get one?

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 02:41 pm Title: An Introduction

I think that I am going to like this story, so please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: i thought i added a new chapter.... it looks like i havent.... help!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 02:03 pm Title: An Introduction

Interesting start. But there is one thing which made this difficult to read (besides a few errors), the spacing. It was all squished together, which is very distracting. Otherwise, this story appears promising.

Author's Response: really sorry about the spacing issues and errors!! wasnt sure how you lay stuff out on here, will edit!

Reviewer: lovesparklys Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 10:39 am Title: An Introduction

very interesting. great start. really would like to see where you go with the story.

Author's Response: thankyou! will update as often as poss

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2010 - 09:53 am Title: An Introduction

Very interesting summary / twist. I only tow of other story where Spike works for the Slayer but both are WIPs, one seems to be abandoned (but only a 'normal Spike').
I'd love to read more of your story, please continue. Good start.

Author's Response: :) thankyou! i read one story where spike was a male slayer, called after buffy 'died' the first time and i loved it. i like the ones where spike is human, but he'll always be a vamp to me!

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