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Reviewer: sugar_slave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2010 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

Finally caught up with the chapters. Yay for me. I wonder what awful crime Buffy is being accused of. I love that you have included Andrew. He is such a fun character. And him being Spike's brother is just hilarious. I could already imagine what sorts of trouble he'll get into. (Sneaking in the dungeons to see a certain witch). Can't wait for the next chapter. ^^

Author's Response: Heya sugar! I'm happy you kept on reading! I'm sorry to say that the next chapter won't hold many answers yet. But the one after that...will have plenty, i think. Andrew is one of my faves and I just couldn't resist but to give him to Spike as his little brother... ;) We'll see what he comes up with... maybe his appearance will lighten the mood a bit. Thank you so very much for reading and taking your time for giving me a review. It means alot to me. seriously :)

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

After thought: You are doing a great job depicting how "witches" were treated. Being from Massachusetts, as you know, we are famous for the Salem Witch trials. Your spot on on their treatment. Tortured until they admit their guilt, then killed. Or thrown into water, if they drown they were innocent, floated witches--then were killed. Nice, huh? Big hugs ; )

Author's Response: Thank you! We have had witch hunts for about 300 years going on here too, any many stories and books came out of it - one of the most famous ones is Visoška Kronika by Ivan Tavčar (Tavchar) and it shows the famouse 'water challenge'. The girl was accused of witchcraft by the jelouse guy who she turned down... I have Salem witche trials open always in one of my tabs. Gosh people were awful in that period.. some are still :) Thank you for keep on reading! I'm so happy that you enjoy it! Hugs

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

The men dishing out the punishment seem to be as evil as the devil for doing the Church's work. Whatever crime Buffy is paying for, shouldn't she at least get a formal accusation in front of a tribunal? Seems like she is to be tortured into compliance before being accused. Perhaps Buffy can request to confess before a priest to at least say that she may be guilty of being born to poor circumstances but nothing else. If she were to ask to be baptised since she is practically being drowned anyways, maybe she could delay being tortured and fate could intervene to absolve her of the supposed crimes. Keeps fingers crossed that she will not have to endure further torments.

Author's Response: Yup... I've always thought it that men punishing 'witches, murderers and heretics' in that time were awful and very sinful themselves. I don't want to say much here, but as for why Buffy hadn't recieved the formal accusation is, because there is too many accused witches in that time and some didn't get as far to even say they are not guilty. they were tortured first so all they would say at the tribunal is that they are guilty - less of a work for them. it was enough that someone their own status or higher saw them at the act of 'crime' and accuse them. if she were royal, only royal witness could have doomed her. But Buffy is poor... and her crime itself, at least the one as terrible to give her this punishment, will be revealed in the next chapter. and after that, things will get on quite quickly. Spike won't get to torture her for very long.

Author's Response: oh, and thank you very much for the review! I must be really wonky for forgetting that...

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 02:14 am Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

I am really sorry that Riley is in this story. Hopefully he won't be so annoying. This story is interesting too me because I can't figure it out. I am enjoying the read.

Author's Response: Hey! Don't worry, Bridget, Riley's role and appearances shall be minimal :) I don't really like him either. Thank you for the review! I'm happy to know you still read the story! hugs

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2010 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

Definitely enjoying .. and curious to what has led to Buffy being called a witch..and by whom?

Why was she always an outcast ? And Andrew-he's going to go to the dungeon and let the cat out of the bag somehow..
And Spike.. already attracted and labeling it - because she is a witch.
Waiting for the next update..

Author's Response: Hey Pam! Love seing your reviews! Buffy's background story will be revealed soon, but not just yet, just like Spike's will be. Andrew is funny that way, isn't he? All curious and disobediant... Thank you so much for taking your time and reviewing! Huggs

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