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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2010 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Spike trying to break Buffy down with subterfuge. Quite interesting. Though I do wonder quite what our girl is accused of. Poor thing. Already seeping under his skin. Update soon!

Author's Response: hey BuffyRat! Thank you for stopping by and reviewing! Of what exactly she was accused of will be revealed in the next chapter - it's gonna be a long one... Update will come right after New Year if I won't make it to finnish sooner. Happy Holidays to you and your family! :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Excellent chapter: long chapter! Full to the brim of watershed moments and discoveries. Welcome addition of Andrew and Anya, two seemingly frivolous but very knowing and observant people who have very quickly understood Spike's dilemma and Buffy's innocence.

Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank You Sue! For reading and reviewing! Means alot to me, and I'm happy I didn't disappoint! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Last things first- So Anya was a test for Buffy.. and not a girl that had just died a bloody death from William's hands ?
True to form-Andrew had to come see Buffy-to play chess of all things?
And Spike might just consider Buffy a witch now that he is enamored with her.
Enjoyed.. sorry you are still feeling ill. And I will have a good holiday with family and good food..

Author's Response: Hello Pam! It was Anya allright :) A few pints of pigs blood and you got quite something to show... My Andrew can't have his Star wars... so he'll have to deal with chess :) Spike's concerns were cut off deliberately... we shall see what he has to say when he comes back to her. Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing again! I'm going to have a nice dinner with my family aswell. Me, my sister and Mom are going to bake tons of cookies this week I hope... it'll be a nice change from the other work. Enjoy with your family! *hugs*

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 08:49 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

So Anya was the girl they dragged off? Spike really is into mental torture and games. Andrew and chess pieces and Glorificus limping imply that Andrew is a sick puppy who needs a keeper twenty-four seven. Poor Buffy, hope that her emotional release with Andrew doesn't weaken her spirit. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Heya Vette! Yup, it was Anya. Spike is quite knowledgeable in torture - his job after all. This type of torture was subtle, but efficient and was used for real in history. Restless Andrew will be the wild card in all this. And Buffy crying - believe me, the best thing for her. :) You'll see in the next few chapters, as the story slowly turns around.. Thank you for your review! :)

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Whoa surprise twist at the very end! LoL...I like it. Also like Andrew going down to see Buffy. Wonder what's going to happen next...

Author's Response: Thank you Kellie! I'm glad you liked my little twist ;) and naughty Andrew with his restless nature... oh the possibillities.. Thank you so much for taking your time and reviewing again! Means alot :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

great chapter. I enjoyed how you have moved the story along. I didn't find it the least bit confusing....well, there is the bit about the chess pieces...but besides that, not confusing at all! Great job, sweetie!

Author's Response: Hey D! Thank you so very much for the review! I was kinda nervous to push forward the events some more, since the events that follows next, would twist the whole story in yet another dirrection.. Hee...the chess pieces... you'll find out, I promise ;) *Hugs*

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Anya was the one screaming? I must say, that was a nice twist I didn't see coming. Nice going there :-)

Author's Response: Hey Sibb! Loved hearing from you again :) Yupp...that was our Anya. Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

So Anya was the other woman in the dungeon. Is that how Spike gets people to confess? What is the chess incident? I can't wait for that explanation. I wish someone would give Buffy a blanket. She must be freezing. Your writing is very descriptive. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Heya Bridget! Yup, that method that Spike is using was actually used for real in those times. They scare people so much that sometimes they'd confess without ever even needing to endure the physical torture. Horrible, I know... Heh...the chess incident.. I promise that you'll find out :) Thank you for your wonderful review! :)

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