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Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2011 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Lips of Thorns

Thanks for updating. So glad to see things finally turning around. Hopefully. I am sure it will not be easy. Lord Rayne will have a time getting her freedom I would say. Your writing is so good. It takes us to that point back in time.

Author's Response: Heya SpikesGirl! Your kind words made me blush. Thank you! Yupp.. Spike doesn't even realise it yet how hard the job will actually be.. Thank you for stopping by again! Love hearing from ya :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2011 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Lips of Thorns

enjoyed.. thanks for the update.
so now to prove Buffy is innocent.
And to find out who Buffy really is ..


Author's Response: Thank you Pam! You shall find out about Buffy quite soon.. not in the next chapter soon, but soon. :) Thank you for the review! I always love to see your words.

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2011 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Fallen in Sacrifice

I've always been amazed at how throughout the centuries men have been able to lay blame to women for their inability to control their impulses. I hope that kiss doesn't cause poor Buffy more trouble.

Author's Response: Hello Victoria! I guess it was easy for them to blame other for their mistakes or their weak control they had over themselves and others. The kiss... well, it came as a shock to me too, so we'll see how things work out in the next chapter :) Thank you very much for stoping by and reviewing! Means alot!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2011 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Fallen in Sacrifice

Well written chapter. The imagery in the beginning was well done. Of course he kissed her. I hope they figure out who framed her soon.

Author's Response: Heya Bridget! Thank you! heheh... Spike does have a taste for women who stands up for themselves.. I'm telling ya, I could not prevent it from happening :) Thank you very much for reviewing and reading! Means alot! :)

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2011 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Fallen in Sacrifice

So glad u updated. Been looking for this chapter to post. Your story is getting better and better. I am drawn to it. He feels like she is bewitching him but maybe it is the other way around, or a little of both. Love your writing. It feels like I have gone back in time to that very moment. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: *bounces around happily* :D It means alot to me that you like reading it so much, SpikesGirl! Yup... I think they are both in trouble now for falling for eachother.. (I mean...who could resist Spike for very long anyway?) Next chapter will follow soon I hope :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2011 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Fallen in Sacrifice

the story is well worth reading . Can't wait to read more. Vette did an fantastic job on the banner, it's awesome. Can,t wait til the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you JO! And Vette really did an amazing job! I'm still drooling over it ;) The next chapter shall be posted soon I hope :) thank you so very much for taking your time for reading AND reviewing! :D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2011 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 9 - Fallen in Sacrifice

So is the woman with the ring Joyce. Have a feeling that Buffy is somehow a child of royalty and hidden for some reason. So how old would Dru's daughter be?
And a kiss.
Enjoyed..

Author's Response: nope... the woman in the hut was not Joyce. Dru is a bit younger than her. More about the Bathory familly in the next chapter :) thank you for the review, Pam! Means alot.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2011 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 9 - Fallen in Sacrifice

Sorry to leave this here, but absolutely beautiful banner, Vette. But I'm not really that surprise, your work is always remarkable!

Author's Response: She really did a great job, hadn't she? :D

Reviewer: Behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2011 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 9 - Fallen in Sacrifice

Very interesting turn in the story. I'm proud of Buffy that she has finally spoke her piece, regardless of her station in life and where she was. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: yes, her life is on the line and it would be wrong if she'd be quiet about it. :) Thank you D.! I'm happy to see that you keep on reading :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2011 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Dare to Dance

Great chapter that created more questions than answers. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: yup ;) can't really answer everything without complicating things a bit more first... it's what i do with delight :D Thanks for stopping by again, sweet D! *hugs tight*

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2011 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter 8 - Dare to Dance

The scene of Buffy's violation where the heaven's opened up and seemed to be crying for her made it look like she was a sacrificial lamb taken by evil in a holy place. Sad and horrible but yet she still survives beyond the experience. If her nightmares show her anything compassionate at all, it would be that she is the victim and is not impure. Insult to injury, after such an ordeal, she is accused of unknown crimes. She is of strong constitution to still have her mental capacities after all that she has endured. Hoping that her strength holds out for whatever torments she is to suffer at the hands of her jailers. Darla, Jenny and Dru seem to be women of strength also, and I wonder if Buffy is Drusilla's daughter that was kept secret. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: That was the image I was hoping you's get, though i deliberately avoided mentioning sacrificion myself. The painted walls of little angels were her only witness - aside from her assailant. What happens next shall be revealed - again through nightmarish dreams. I've made all of the women stron ones here. they had to be in such times... As for the daughter of Dru... you shall see ;) Thank you for reviewing! Means so much to me...

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2011 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 7 - Night, River and the Rain

Sounds like Buffy was set up for the blame for whatever crimes she is accused of. The stranger who came across her home sounds like he knew her predicament and took advantage of it. The harsh life she was facing is just as brutal as her captivity. Glad that Andrew gave her a crumb of kindness by making sure she received a blanket. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: I set the whole thing quite dark...Life in those times was not easy... especially for the poor. I will update soon! Thank you so very much for keep on reading and reviewing, Vette! Means a lot! :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 - 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Night, River and the Rain

Really enjoyed. I like how we have an insight to how Buffy ended up there. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yup, yup... more will come soon :D Thanks D, for coming by and reviewing again! :D *hugs tight*

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Night, River and the Rain

Excellent. Andrew as Spike's more familial and knowing brother is an inspired choice on your part. A chapter full of revelations and reasons for Buffy's 'predicament'.

Author's Response: Thank you, sue! More revelations shall follow soon! Your reviews makes me feel excited and willing to write further :D Thank you again for stopping by!

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 7 - Night, River and the Rain

I was so excited to see this story updated. I have never followed a work in progress before,always afraid I'll be left hanging but I can't stay away from this one.

Author's Response: Hey Victoria! I am beyond happy to know you gave this story a chance to follow it while it is still in progress! :) I will try and update very soon because I don't want to leave you hanging for too long :) Thank you for the kind review! .D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter 7 - Night, River and the Rain

Thanks for giving her a blanket. Hopefully she will be able to keep it.

Author's Response: We shall se in the next chapter if it was a good idea to give her the blanket ;)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter 7 - Night, River and the Rain

I enjoyed this chapter. A lot of things were explained but there are still a lot of holes. At least Buffy has one person on her side. thanks for the update.

Author's Response: yup...can't reveal everything so soon... I am happy to hear that you enjoyed reading it :) Thank you for the review Bridget!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2010 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Spike trying to break Buffy down with subterfuge. Quite interesting. Though I do wonder quite what our girl is accused of. Poor thing. Already seeping under his skin. Update soon!

Author's Response: hey BuffyRat! Thank you for stopping by and reviewing! Of what exactly she was accused of will be revealed in the next chapter - it's gonna be a long one... Update will come right after New Year if I won't make it to finnish sooner. Happy Holidays to you and your family! :)

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Excellent chapter: long chapter! Full to the brim of watershed moments and discoveries. Welcome addition of Andrew and Anya, two seemingly frivolous but very knowing and observant people who have very quickly understood Spike's dilemma and Buffy's innocence.

Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank You Sue! For reading and reviewing! Means alot to me, and I'm happy I didn't disappoint! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Last things first- So Anya was a test for Buffy.. and not a girl that had just died a bloody death from William's hands ?
True to form-Andrew had to come see Buffy-to play chess of all things?
And Spike might just consider Buffy a witch now that he is enamored with her.
Enjoyed.. sorry you are still feeling ill. And I will have a good holiday with family and good food..

Author's Response: Hello Pam! It was Anya allright :) A few pints of pigs blood and you got quite something to show... My Andrew can't have his Star wars... so he'll have to deal with chess :) Spike's concerns were cut off deliberately... we shall see what he has to say when he comes back to her. Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing again! I'm going to have a nice dinner with my family aswell. Me, my sister and Mom are going to bake tons of cookies this week I hope... it'll be a nice change from the other work. Enjoy with your family! *hugs*

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 08:49 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

So Anya was the girl they dragged off? Spike really is into mental torture and games. Andrew and chess pieces and Glorificus limping imply that Andrew is a sick puppy who needs a keeper twenty-four seven. Poor Buffy, hope that her emotional release with Andrew doesn't weaken her spirit. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Heya Vette! Yup, it was Anya. Spike is quite knowledgeable in torture - his job after all. This type of torture was subtle, but efficient and was used for real in history. Restless Andrew will be the wild card in all this. And Buffy crying - believe me, the best thing for her. :) You'll see in the next few chapters, as the story slowly turns around.. Thank you for your review! :)

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Whoa surprise twist at the very end! LoL...I like it. Also like Andrew going down to see Buffy. Wonder what's going to happen next...

Author's Response: Thank you Kellie! I'm glad you liked my little twist ;) and naughty Andrew with his restless nature... oh the possibillities.. Thank you so much for taking your time and reviewing again! Means alot :)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

great chapter. I enjoyed how you have moved the story along. I didn't find it the least bit confusing....well, there is the bit about the chess pieces...but besides that, not confusing at all! Great job, sweetie!

Author's Response: Hey D! Thank you so very much for the review! I was kinda nervous to push forward the events some more, since the events that follows next, would twist the whole story in yet another dirrection.. Hee...the chess pieces... you'll find out, I promise ;) *Hugs*

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

Anya was the one screaming? I must say, that was a nice twist I didn't see coming. Nice going there :-)

Author's Response: Hey Sibb! Loved hearing from you again :) Yupp...that was our Anya. Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Chess Game

So Anya was the other woman in the dungeon. Is that how Spike gets people to confess? What is the chess incident? I can't wait for that explanation. I wish someone would give Buffy a blanket. She must be freezing. Your writing is very descriptive. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Heya Bridget! Yup, that method that Spike is using was actually used for real in those times. They scare people so much that sometimes they'd confess without ever even needing to endure the physical torture. Horrible, I know... Heh...the chess incident.. I promise that you'll find out :) Thank you for your wonderful review! :)

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