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Reviewer: sugar_slave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Clouds and Poppies

So typical, Parker accusing Buffy of being a witch just because he can't keep it in his pants. It seems to me men did that a lot in those times. When they were attracted to a woman and she was not of the nobility it was because she was a witch or a demon or something else and when she didn't play along she got a death sentence.
To tell you the truth I can't imagine how Buffy will be able to overcome all that Spike is putting her through, but I think I can trust you to lead us through the journey. Waiting for the next chapter. *hugs*

Author's Response: That is exactly what happened to some of the women in that time, who were murdered as witches... but by no means there were only females.. males too, were accused of witchcraft. and burned. I made myself quite a challenge to put Spuffy couple together in circumstances as these. I think it's gonna work out quite well for them in the end... you'll see.. ;) Thank you so very much for reviewing, Sugar! Means alot.. *hugs tight*

Reviewer: total geek Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 - 09:27 am Title: Chapter 5 - Clouds and Poppies

oooh im glad there was a chapter this week coz this is the last week before i go to the place of no internet for xmas! im really into this fic i hope a chapter up date for the new year

Author's Response: Don't worry, I'll update this week too. in about two days. :) Thank you very much for stopping by again and reviewing! Have fun for the Xmas and new year! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2010 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 5 - Clouds and Poppies

So unrequited love or refusal of "sex" .. equals you are a witch and now condemned to die.. ?
enjoying.. but sad.

Author's Response: Hi Pam! yea... I'm afraid so... I've read so many times that jelousy and resentment were some of the reasons for being burned in that time. You could accuse anyone and people would believe it, especially if the crops were bad and plague was reaping at people all the time. They targeted inocents for things they had no control over just to feel better. It is not all Parker's fault though... Thank you so very much for reviewing! Means alot to me that you take time and let me know for every chapter what you think..

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2010 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter 5 - Clouds and Poppies

Yikes! Poor Buffy.

i do hope your headaches go away. *hugs*

Author's Response: Thank you IT! Means alot that you gave this fic a go... Hugs!

Reviewer: Hollows Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2010 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 5 - Clouds and Poppies

Agh!!! I'm left at the edge of my seat here! I love the tone you set for this story. It's so dark, which is exactly what I love. Oh, poor Buffy. That damn Parker better pay later for what's he's accused her of. >:[ And I love the way you described Spike at the end. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hey Hollows! Great to read you again :) Damn Parker indeed... but he belongs in her past - still I'm not saying we saw the last of him... ;) And, oh! my first cliff hanger! :D Thank you so much for reading! I'll update soon again!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2010 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 5 - Clouds and Poppies

Poor Buffy, she is in this predicament because she refused to let Parker paw at her. The girl tortured to death in the next cell was probably just as innocent. Spike is looking like a monster at this point, who enjoys his work. Seems that no matter what an accused does, plead guilty or innocent; the outcome is the same – brutal death. Hope that Buffy does not suffer Spike’s specialized torture so soon after another girl is killed. Seems hopeless for Buffy so far, let’s see what happens next. Hope you feel better too!

Author's Response: Thank you Vette! The death metal band in my head had taken a pause at the moment :) Buffy isn't in this only because of Parker.. the memory was from a few years back, when her mother was still alive... Oh...and monstrous Spike? he has some secrets and tricks up his sleeve... you'll see in the next chappie... Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2010 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter 5 - Clouds and Poppies

The chapter may be short but the picture of terror you painted will haunt me for a long time. Amazing story.

Author's Response: Thank you Shadows! It won't be just gloom and doom, I promise! :)

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2010 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter 5 - Clouds and Poppies

Loved this chapter. It wasn't short at all. It held all the features of a great cliffhanger. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you D! Your opinion always means alot to me. :)

Reviewer: sugar_slave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2010 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

Finally caught up with the chapters. Yay for me. I wonder what awful crime Buffy is being accused of. I love that you have included Andrew. He is such a fun character. And him being Spike's brother is just hilarious. I could already imagine what sorts of trouble he'll get into. (Sneaking in the dungeons to see a certain witch). Can't wait for the next chapter. ^^

Author's Response: Heya sugar! I'm happy you kept on reading! I'm sorry to say that the next chapter won't hold many answers yet. But the one after that...will have plenty, i think. Andrew is one of my faves and I just couldn't resist but to give him to Spike as his little brother... ;) We'll see what he comes up with... maybe his appearance will lighten the mood a bit. Thank you so very much for reading and taking your time for giving me a review. It means alot to me. seriously :)

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

After thought: You are doing a great job depicting how "witches" were treated. Being from Massachusetts, as you know, we are famous for the Salem Witch trials. Your spot on on their treatment. Tortured until they admit their guilt, then killed. Or thrown into water, if they drown they were innocent, floated witches--then were killed. Nice, huh? Big hugs ; )

Author's Response: Thank you! We have had witch hunts for about 300 years going on here too, any many stories and books came out of it - one of the most famous ones is Visoška Kronika by Ivan Tavčar (Tavchar) and it shows the famouse 'water challenge'. The girl was accused of witchcraft by the jelouse guy who she turned down... I have Salem witche trials open always in one of my tabs. Gosh people were awful in that period.. some are still :) Thank you for keep on reading! I'm so happy that you enjoy it! Hugs

Reviewer: sugar_slave Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 09:41 am Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

Haven't had time to keep up with your updates so I am behind on my reading. I hope to catch up soon. Another great chpter. Love your depiction of the gruesome duo - Angelus being his evil self and Dru as insane as ever.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're still reading! hugs

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

The men dishing out the punishment seem to be as evil as the devil for doing the Church's work. Whatever crime Buffy is paying for, shouldn't she at least get a formal accusation in front of a tribunal? Seems like she is to be tortured into compliance before being accused. Perhaps Buffy can request to confess before a priest to at least say that she may be guilty of being born to poor circumstances but nothing else. If she were to ask to be baptised since she is practically being drowned anyways, maybe she could delay being tortured and fate could intervene to absolve her of the supposed crimes. Keeps fingers crossed that she will not have to endure further torments.

Author's Response: Yup... I've always thought it that men punishing 'witches, murderers and heretics' in that time were awful and very sinful themselves. I don't want to say much here, but as for why Buffy hadn't recieved the formal accusation is, because there is too many accused witches in that time and some didn't get as far to even say they are not guilty. they were tortured first so all they would say at the tribunal is that they are guilty - less of a work for them. it was enough that someone their own status or higher saw them at the act of 'crime' and accuse them. if she were royal, only royal witness could have doomed her. But Buffy is poor... and her crime itself, at least the one as terrible to give her this punishment, will be revealed in the next chapter. and after that, things will get on quite quickly. Spike won't get to torture her for very long.

Author's Response: oh, and thank you very much for the review! I must be really wonky for forgetting that...

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 02:14 am Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

I am really sorry that Riley is in this story. Hopefully he won't be so annoying. This story is interesting too me because I can't figure it out. I am enjoying the read.

Author's Response: Hey! Don't worry, Bridget, Riley's role and appearances shall be minimal :) I don't really like him either. Thank you for the review! I'm happy to know you still read the story! hugs

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2010 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 4 - No Angels, No Flowers

Definitely enjoying .. and curious to what has led to Buffy being called a witch..and by whom?

Why was she always an outcast ? And Andrew-he's going to go to the dungeon and let the cat out of the bag somehow..
And Spike.. already attracted and labeling it - because she is a witch.
Waiting for the next update..

Author's Response: Hey Pam! Love seing your reviews! Buffy's background story will be revealed soon, but not just yet, just like Spike's will be. Andrew is funny that way, isn't he? All curious and disobediant... Thank you so much for taking your time and reviewing! Huggs

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2010 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

Buffy is accused of a witchcraft and Spike being tempted by her is convinced that she is. Now is the time for a vengeance demon to hear a wish from her but I doubt that she'll be so lucky. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hey Vette! It really would be perfect setting for a vengeance demon... Imagine all the work they'd have in that period. Alas.. this one is all-human fic, though people here may act like anything but that. Thank you so much for the review! Seriously, it means alot! :)

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2010 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

Liked it a lot, look forward to reading more soon.!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, tinkerbell! Means alot that you stopped by and reviewed! :D

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

Compelling, for his cruelty and her suffering, for his attraction and hence more of her suffering ..... and the apparent involvement of Drusilla and Angelus. But the force between Spike and Buffy? Spot on.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing Sue! That is exactly what I was trying to write, so I'm happy that you found it good :) Update will be in three days.. :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

It is quite obvious that Angelus is behind Buffy's captured and labeling as a witch. I need more backstory. Why is Spike so mean? I guess I will have to be patient. Interesting chapter.

Author's Response: hey Bridget! A little bit of backstory comes in the next chapter. Thank you very much for taking time and reviewing! Update will come in 3 days..

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2010 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

Enjoying your story. Looking forward to seeing how much of a monster William will actually turn out to be in this one, please update soon.

Author's Response: Hey! A little bit of a true William will be shown in the next chapter. :) Thank you for taking time and reviewing, it is much appreciated! I will update in about three days...

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2010 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

Wonderful chapter! Loved the descriptions of her dream and during her interactions with Spike. Definitely looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Awww.... Thank you D.! It was sorta fun writing Spike's mind all messed up... Thanks again for stopping by and reviewing! Means alot! :D

Reviewer: total geek Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2010 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

yay! i do love finding new chapters when i check tsr... yet another good chapter this is becoming an unmissable fic!

Author's Response: *big grinn* Thank you!! :D I hope you keep on reading when I post another one in a few days! :)

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2010 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

I'm curious to see where this goes. Everything is so dark!! Here's hoping Buffy's strength can last!

Author's Response: Yup! Toldya it is going to be quite angsty... but the end will be nice, I promise :) And thank you very much for reviewing! I appreciate thoughts of each and everyone of you! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2010 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 3 - In Noctem

Enjoyed.
Waiting to find who set up Buffy as a witch.. and what Angelus and Dru are up to..

Author's Response: Hey there Pam! Thank you for stopping by again and letting me know you still read it! Angelus and Dru are really up to no good ;) More will be revealed soon... :D

Reviewer: total geek Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2010 - 12:54 am Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

awesome! how did you know i was currently obsessed with hitorical spuffy fic at the mo? i cant wait till the nxt chapter!

Author's Response: Heya total geek! I'm happy to know that you are enjoing it! I myself love the historical fics too! I hope this one doesn't disappoint you. :) Thank you very much for taking your time and reviewing! It realy means alot to me! :)

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2010 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood on the dance floor

I am loving this story!! I loved the TV show The Tudors when it was on and this story reminds me of it. Keep the great chapters coming :)

Author's Response: Hey Brittany! I'm sad to say that I know of the show, but I have never seen it myself cause we didn't have it here. Maybe I'll check it out sometime :) Thank you so very much for your wonderful review! I hope you'll like the next chapter too... it's comming very soon and it's extra long... and mostly Spike and Buffy :)

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