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Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2010 - 09:25 am Title: Chapter 4-The First and the Third

Just found this story and I'm really glad I did. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

Great story. Can't wait to read more. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

Interesting spin on this story. This chapter shows that Buffy is looking for a connection that her husband isn't giving her--not sex, but being together. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and sticking with it! I should have more up in a few days.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 2- Feasting on the Crumb

Loved this chapter. It was realistic, with the awkwardness of two people who are unsure about what this is, but enjoying it all the same. It makes Buffy look more like a woman who's searching for something she isn't finding at home, and not a seductress. Enjoyed. on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the awkwardness. Both of the characters are really vulnerable. Given what we find out about Buffy's relationship with Riley, if she were more predatory she'd be totally unlikable. Glad you're not automatically turned off to her.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Mrs. Buffy Anne Finn

Loved...loved...loved the start! Can't wait to read some Spuffy and the exploration of their lives past this encounter. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: total geek Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

I really like this fic! more please!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

this is seeming to be quite an interesting read, I hope you do explore the riley/buffy thing more and can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I am going to go into Riley and Buffy a bit more, but it's primarily a Spike/Buffy story. Hoping to make him much more sympathetic than he was on the series. I don't know why I could never really warm up to him on the show, but I couldn't.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

How old was Buffy when she had Dawn? And as per usual I love it.

Author's Response: She was 17--I go into that in the next chapter.Thanks for the comment!

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