[Report This]Date: 03/31/2011 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
Oh this was great...definitely worked for me. :) I loved seeing some of Spike's backstory, and I liked how he and Giles got close on the night of the blackout and he stayed in CA.
Nice explanation of Will's three names, they are not seperate identities, they are ALL him. Love your dig at Angel/us lol
The DMP as a gay bar...LMAO.
Now I can't wait for the Meeting between him and Buffy.
Plz post soon..loving this . :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Ami. I felt it was important not to leave it as I did in the previous chapter. I wanted the readers to see that he could move on. Yeah, I hated immensely that Joss made Angel/Angelus into separate people! He's not! He was an ass at the beginning as a human, a bigger sadist ass as Angelus, and a broody ass as Angel! Ah, now I feel better after my little rant. I'm glad you liked the name of the gay bar. I found it funny, but I have a twisted sense of humor!
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2011 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
This is one of the most moving stories I have read on this site.
I wanted to let you know that I feel you could be published in the literary world. Your words and the style of your writing is highly professional.
I hope you post another chappie soon!
spuf
Author's Response: It's amazing, this review. Especially coming from a well established author such as yourself. It's ironic, that I have no words to respond to this review. All I can say is thank you. I know these words don't capture what I'm feeling inside, that's the only thing that is coming to my mind...thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2011 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
I liked this chapter. I am glad you are telling the backstory and I guess the next chapter will tell about their meeting. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I felt a backstory was important. Thank you for reading, enjoying, and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2011 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
God I love the way u write, your writing makes me feel lot's of emotions. I know what u mean about being a Mom and the snow, we New Yorker's got hit a bit this year,it took month's to melt. I'll be looking for more updates and understand lack of.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jo. I'm glad you're enjoying the way I write and how I bring forth your emotions. As a neighboring Bostonian, snow has been our constant companion this winter. Never mind winter, yesterday, on April 1st, it snowed! WTF!!!! I'm glad you understand about RL and updates, and I'm equally glad you are enjoying this.
Author's Response: Oh, and one more thing...GO REDSOX!!! LOL!!!!
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2011 - 05:41 am Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to find out more about Buffy's past and why Spike and Buffy split.
Author's Response: Thanks anna! More will be unfolding. It may take a bit, but I hope you'll continue to read and enjoy.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
It worked, Hon. For me at least. :)
Was happy to see another glympse into Spike's past and how he came to meet Doyle and then Buffy. (Double Meat palace as a gay bar? - priceless LOL)
Can't wait to read some more :)
Author's Response: Thanks, K!!! I'm glad you liked!!! Yeah, I'm stoked you liked the DMP as a gay bar. My twisted sense of humor strikes again!!!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
Love hearing about Spike's background as it leads up to where he first meets Buffy! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks Photographynut!!! More will be coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
Enjoyed the update. Looking forward to more. I'm curious what William did after that (job).
Author's Response: Thanks cordy! More will be coming soon! TY for reading, enjoying, and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
Please try to update as soon as you can, because I like the story and I would like to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you, amayuscula. My plans are to update soon. Hopefully my plans with become a reality!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
And now it is all finally coming together. Spike is right on the verge of the rest of his life. Pretty brilliant. Hopefully, reliving what got him to Buffy can get him back to her again. Already ready for more. Update soon!
Author's Response: *blushing* You do need to go through the bad to appreciate the good even more.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
Thanks for posting. Looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: No, thank you IT for reading, enjoying, and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
Great chapter! It was nice seeing him become closer to Giles as well as get his life back together. If I have any gripe is that I wanted to read more! It ended just before he went into Buffy's diner. I was like "noooo"! But I have a feeling that was an evil plan on your part to keep us wanting more. Can't wait to read his point of view. Can't wait to finally see them work through their problems and make up! (Even if it does take long) :-)
Author's Response: *giggling maniacally* I'm not evil. Well, maybe a little. I always want you readers to want more! That's when I know I'm giving you guys good stuff! It will take a while for them to work through their problems. It took a long time to get where they are, so it will take a while to work through them. I hope you'll continue to read and enjoy. Big hugs!
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
That chapter worked just fine. Scene setting (or character setting) of the clearest order - especially as now we know who he's just about to meet in this particular cafe .......
Soon, please!
Author's Response: Thanks, sue. More will be coming soon.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2011 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Making of the Man
Enjoyed the update.. and more info about Spike's past..
Assuming Buffy will be the waitress IIRC.. ?
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Yup, the next chapter will be Spike's POV of their first meeting. Filling in the blanks of Buffy's thoughts and view.
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