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Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2011 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

So close! You are evil to leave it hanging like that. Brilliant but evil. Although tad frustrated she stopped the smoochies, I think it was probably better that way and true to the characters in this story and they've been through much they really need to talk first.

Author's Response: *insert evil laugh here* Yeah, I knew Will, as well as the readers, would be frustrated I ended the smoochies, without actually lip lock, but like you said they have a lot to talk about.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2011 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

Loved hearing Buffy's background! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks Photo. I thought it was important to give both characters backgrounds. Will wasn't the only one who had a somewhat difficult past

Reviewer: I_T Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

Great chapter. I really enjoy the flash-backs, but I hope we'll have more present now?

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Thanks IT! And, yes, we will be dealing with the present now. No, thank you for reading, enjoying, and reviewing

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

This was a great chapter BBE. Things really got bad there for our couple. And you're right...you didn't have to go into great detail about Buffy and Angel..we all know what happened :( Poor Buffy,now we can understand her better. I'm glad she realized that Will needed support too, and is going to talk to him.

Looking forward to the next chappies, even tho it's gonna be hard. *girds loins*

Loving this so much. :) Plz post soon...I'm on pins and needles.

L

Author's Response: Thanks so much, AMI! I'm glad the readers can understand her better. She wasn't the only one that had a difficult past. I'll try not to keep you on pins and needles too long. Thanks so much again for continuing to read and review my story!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

So very tragic that past with Angel. Really makes her more powerful, and more well matched with Spike. They share such tragic pasts, and were able once upon a time to make each other stronger. Perhaps they will be able to put back the pieces, become whole people again. Whether that lets them reunite as a couple or just as people again. Seeing the whole picture of who people are only helps to explain why they've ended up where they are. A truly thought provoking chapter. Update soon.

Author's Response: Exactly BR! I feel the same. They are perfectly matched, but just have forgotten all that had brought them together and made them stronger. I agree also seeing someone fully makes you understand them better. That is why I included their pasts. Thanks so much for your thoughtful and insightful review.

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

I'm glad they're going to talk, I'm wondering if maybe Angel did something to Dawn? Liked the foreshadowing with Buffy knowing stalking law.

Author's Response: Yes, the "talk" will be coming. And no, Angel didn't do anything to Dawn. Angel won't be making anymore cameos in this story. As always, thanks for your review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

Buffy didn't have it easy - her past must have influenced her a lot.
Hopefully talking will be a step in the right direction, back together. *sigh* Definitely not easy.

Author's Response: Yes, as for everyone, our pasts influences us. How much is up to the person. No, this won't be easy. Thanks so much for reviewing, it means a lot to me

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

Will and Buffy.. sure have a tremultuous relationship at this point. Thoughts of love and lust turn quickly into "negative" feelings and words that seem to be moving into contempt and hate. Although Buffy at times thinks it is the voice of reason.
I don't think Buffy is ready to stop the divorce proceedings for some reason. But trying to comfort William/Spike might not be enough. I think he would rather be alone than receive pity from his wife.
Time will tell .. see how the story unfolds. Been quite a negative ride at this junction for them. You kind of have to push back and take a deep breath after involving yourself in their delimma.. a "bow" to your writing.. nothing bad.. in that statement. But it does draw tears and pause.. and the need for a cleansing breath.
enjoying..
The thing with Angel was not that bad..

Author's Response: Yes, Pam, I've put a lot of my own feelings, experiences, and thoughts into each chapter. I'm not saying I've experience each thing that has happened to our characters, but there are bits and pieces of my own life threaded throughout. This story has been catharic to me. Will and Buffy have been through a lot. But in saying this, not all of it has been negative. Hopefully, this will be what they are able to remember.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

I liked the chapter. I would like to read more so please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: thanks amayuscula. My plans are to update soon. Hopefully my muse will comply!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 14: The Breaking Point

I figured her relationship with Angel wasn't rainbows and butterflies given the fact Buffy memorized California stalking laws. Looking forward to the next couple of chapters, and find out about the root of their troubles.

Author's Response: Yeah, I've been dropping hints about numerous things in previous chapters. Glad you were able to pick this one up. The next chapter will be coming soon. Thanks for you continuing with this story and reviewing. This means a lot!

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