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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 7

hmm why would she just leave him there? I'm assuming the queen of the damned was a willow turned. i'm thinking this is the wishverse so that's where the scar comes from and why willow and xander are vamps. still soo crazy interesting. i'm so in love with this story :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Willow is indeed queen of the damned.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2011 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 7

I have began to read this story. It's very good, an interesting storyline and wellwritten. I got the feeling that something happend to the original Buffyverse after the show (Buffy and Spike together in Rome) and they were placed in a new reallity where everyone they knew are human. Well the story is finished so I will know when I keep reading.

Author's Response: Hey Magnus, Interesting idea, but not what I was going for in this story. It's just a fantasy playing with the characters and shifting their origins, a fun "what if?" Thanks for the compliment and the comment!

Reviewer: Miss M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2011 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ooooh, intriguing - am already hooked ... Your descriptive language is very engaging and I'm enjoying the edginess - looking forward to seeing where this is heading x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I got a bit sidetracked on this story, trying to come up with an ending. When I finish my current project, "The Secret of the Boy You Never Kissed," I'm planning to end this tale. Thanks for the comment and the compliment.

Reviewer: evelynferguson Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2011 - 05:59 am Title: Chapter 7

Cool twist. I never saw it coming. You're a very good writer, MDL...

Author's Response: Thanks so much, evelyn! Glad you didn't see the twist coming.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2011 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 7

I got an inkling a few chapters back that this was what was going on (Ever since Nikki was mentioned I started to think about the perspective that her boyfriend had, and it got me wondering if that was the case... I mean.. Buffy here was a bit strong...and was not repelled by those charms that Tara made - meant she was one of the good guys..) I am so happy to read this. It's a new plotline (at least for me, cause i've never read anything quite like it before). great job!
Spike feels abandoned at the moment by Buffy... she will have some explaining to do.. I wonder now, If Tara has more knowledge of all this..and then there is also Gunn... :)
off to read some more :)

Author's Response: I've never read it anywhere, either. It seemed like a natural to me though, which as why I was being so coy about the description, I thought everybody would guess right away.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2011 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

Sorry, if you're looking for critism here, you won't find it! This story has me intrigued and keeps me guessing. I love your descriptions of the club and the throngs of people there. Amazing

Author's Response: That club is a real place, and on a Saturday night you can't move.

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2011 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

I've read hundreds of fics. You have managed to make it original, ten years after the show has ended and fanfic has become old and repetitive. You are made of awesome. Each chapter releases a bit more, blending a human reality with Dopplegangland.

Author's Response: Thank you. Actually, praise like that deserves gratitude in all caps. THANK YOU! I'm just glad you like to read it, hope I can continue to met your expectations.

Author's Response: I mean meat your expectations. Typo in the response section. Classy.

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Reviewer: a Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2011 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 7

You have such great phrases. I particularly love this line: "Toy was holding him, she was warm and above her head the moon was a pearl button sewn into a cloudy, velvet sky. "

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was tumbling out of that very bar when I had that thought. (It's a real place called Gooskie's, but there aren't vampires there. You do have to go down a narrow alley to get to the place, depending on where you park.)

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2011 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter 7

Well that was something of a twist. I didn't expect to see vampires in this story. I was thinking more along the lines of Toy running from a gang or mafia--you know some dark dirty underground human activity. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response: I was loathe to mention the vampire stuff because I figured everyone who is reading fan fiction would figure out Toy/Buffy's past instantly. Thank you for the comment and for reading the story!

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