Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter 24
Aaaah, you're killing me here! I can't believe what happened and now I gotta go read more asap.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was going for tense, glad it hit the mark.
Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter 23
Oh crap! How did Wesley find them?? Also, I forgot to mention how absolutely cute is Spike's foot fetish. lol Great chapter as always. :)
Author's Response: Spike's foot fetish is based on the movie "Sid & Nancy." In that film Sid Vicious had a foot fetish and since Spike was based on him I always thought it would be neat to give him a foot fetish. I thought for this story it really worked because his character is so into being dominated, he actually fantasizes about being stepped on. Also, Wesley had been tracking them through his connections in the demon community. He was following clusters of disappearances.
Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 22
They have such a great harmony between them. Love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I was striving for a sense of family between the characters.
Date: 03/17/2011 - 05:35 am Title: Chapter 26
Love love love this chapter! I also like how you put Veruca in the story, she was such a weird, interesting character, but she's rarely seen. Waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 03/13/2011 - 11:58 am Title: Chapter 25
That was intense chapter. Tara struggling with the weight of whichever person she was carying or dragging, everything was very realistic.
Foolish Council, but i guess they had to come up with something according to the mess that was left behind.
Loved Buffy's words at the end. Can't wait to read some more..
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I will probably post more next week.
Date: 03/13/2011 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 25
Love how everything was able to fall into place and how truly naive the council is. A lucky break and a fabulous outcome. I just wonder if they will ever have any way of knowing how truly lucky they are. Who would tell them there is another slayer and that the council believes them dead? Update soon, it's time for a happy ending.
Author's Response: I will probably update next week. The happy ending is coming.
Date: 03/12/2011 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 25
Glad everyone is ok! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/12/2011 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 25
Really like the chapter! Is the story almost over?? Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: The story is nearly over. I have exactly one trick left up my sleeve and hopefully it won't make everybody mad. I have in mind two or at most three more.
Date: 03/12/2011 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 25
Yay for Tara! Thank heavens she was there. So part of the prophecy has come to pass and Travers is too single-minded (thankfully) to see other possibilities. Dang, these last few chapters were tense. Can't wait to see the Watchers Council comes down. And yay, money!
Author's Response: Thank you! I second your Yay for Tara. Travers is wrong about everything he says in that speech, glad that came through!
Date: 03/12/2011 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 25
I wondered how you were going to take care of things, and I must say I am NOT disappointed. You rock.
Author's Response: That's a huge, huge compliment. I was very worried. On another note, Travers is extremely wrong about the coming back from the dead thing.
Date: 03/12/2011 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 25
Go Tara - my hero!! Great chapter - the previous chapter was so creepy I was a little worried the creepiness would continue longer than my heart could take.
Author's Response: I don't want to creep out your heart! In case I don't update soon, the characters are in for a peaceful time. The story is wrapping, so there will only be about two or maybe three chapters left.
Date: 03/12/2011 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 25
Absolutely loved this chapter! It's not often you read Tara saving the day, and you did it so well. Travers...what a smug bastard! Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I wanted to do a call back to when Tara sacrifices herself to save Dawn by getting brain sucked by Glory. I thought that was so amazing of the character being that she hardly knew Dawn. What Tara does there is lost by the end of the episode because Glory finds them anyway, but I've always thought of her as a heroic character.
Date: 03/12/2011 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm so glad they're safe. At least, I hope they are. I'm looking forward to more soon.
Author's Response: The story is wrapping up, and they are heading into a really peaceful period. I think there may only be two chapters left.
Date: 03/11/2011 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1
You had me on the edge of my chair that entire last chapter. And the whole moving forward by a year? Excellent! It really added to the mood of the story. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/10/2011 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh...My! I literally had a physical reaction from this chapter! Goosebumps and everything! Your portrayal of Wesley was creepy and throughout the chapter I was on the edge of my seat reading what he was doing to everyone, and then he goes and shoots himself in the tub--completely unexpected. Brava, lady!
Author's Response: That is amazing praise. Thank you! I came up with the tub thing first and rewrote the lead up to it a dozen times in my head before I came up with that scene. Glad it kept you in suspense.
Date: 03/10/2011 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 24
Creepy, wicked Wesley. Bastard still seems to have some way off kilter emotional compass, but I can only hope he has underestimated Buffy. Thank god he didn't actually assault her. Bastard. Hope Tara may have a trick or two up her sleeve as well. Update soon.
Author's Response: He does have a weird moral code. The scary thing about Wesley was that he felt bad about what happened to Spike not because it was a tragedy, but because of why he did it. I thought it was more effective for him not to attack her; also, I hate writing or reading that sort of thing. You get the idea of the depth of his betrayal without it, I think.
Anyway, thank you for the comment!
Date: 03/10/2011 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 24
Wasn't expecting that! More please!
Author's Response: Thank You for commenting!
Date: 03/09/2011 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 24
Yikes! Eeep! Boo! Wesley sucks! Wow, he deserves way more than just a quick exit. I'll be checking for updates like every hour because this cliffhanger is filling me up with anxiety! Your evil. ;-)
Author's Response: Don't mean to be evil, but you know, vampire.
I will not be posting a new chapter until at least the end of the week, I haven't even started on this one yet. Sorry, don't be anxious. Also, thanks for commenting!
Date: 03/09/2011 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
Wow.. heartbreaking.
If Buffy drowns even for just a minute another Slayer is born, right? But in the hands of such Council I don't like the idea very much.
Beautifully written chapter..
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, another slayer would be called if she died for even a minute.
Date: 03/09/2011 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 24
WHAT!!?? I was totally not expecting that!! Wesley's a bit touched, isn't he?? Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Wesley is touched. Glad I could throw in another twist, hope it isn't getting too out there. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 03/09/2011 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh, this was riveting! You managed to make it horrifying and grotesque. I felt so horrible for all of them with the exception of Wesley, but you maybe even made me feel a bit sorry for him in some twisted way. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, I really wanted this to be creepy and suspenseful. Wesley really does love Buffy in his own deranged way, and he can't bear to watch her die, so he concocted this way of killing her while acting out some wish fulfillment on his part. Thank you for the comment and for reading this!
Date: 03/09/2011 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 24
like it
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 03/08/2011 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh dear.. Wesley. Has he gone crazy or what?
Loved the descriptions in this chapter! Very vivid.
can't wait to read some more..
Author's Response: Wesley is crazy, but he's acting on orders of the council.
Date: 03/08/2011 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh dear.. Wesley. Has he gone crazy or what?
Loved the descriptions in this chapter! Very vivid.
can't wait to read some more..
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you liked the descriptions. As always in this story, I was describing a real place.
Date: 03/08/2011 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 23
Wesley lost his mind! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!