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Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter 24

Aaaah, you're killing me here! I can't believe what happened and now I gotta go read more asap.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was going for tense, glad it hit the mark.

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter 23

Oh crap! How did Wesley find them?? Also, I forgot to mention how absolutely cute is Spike's foot fetish. lol Great chapter as always. :)

Author's Response: Spike's foot fetish is based on the movie "Sid & Nancy." In that film Sid Vicious had a foot fetish and since Spike was based on him I always thought it would be neat to give him a foot fetish. I thought for this story it really worked because his character is so into being dominated, he actually fantasizes about being stepped on. Also, Wesley had been tracking them through his connections in the demon community. He was following clusters of disappearances.

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 22

They have such a great harmony between them. Love this story!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I was striving for a sense of family between the characters.

Reviewer: nerfherder Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2011 - 05:35 am Title: Chapter 26

Love love love this chapter! I also like how you put Veruca in the story, she was such a weird, interesting character, but she's rarely seen. Waiting for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 11:58 am Title: Chapter 25

That was intense chapter. Tara struggling with the weight of whichever person she was carying or dragging, everything was very realistic.
Foolish Council, but i guess they had to come up with something according to the mess that was left behind.
Loved Buffy's words at the end. Can't wait to read some more..

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I will probably post more next week.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 25

Love how everything was able to fall into place and how truly naive the council is. A lucky break and a fabulous outcome. I just wonder if they will ever have any way of knowing how truly lucky they are. Who would tell them there is another slayer and that the council believes them dead? Update soon, it's time for a happy ending.

Author's Response: I will probably update next week. The happy ending is coming.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 25

Glad everyone is ok! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: nerfherder Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 25

Really like the chapter! Is the story almost over?? Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: The story is nearly over. I have exactly one trick left up my sleeve and hopefully it won't make everybody mad. I have in mind two or at most three more.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 25

Yay for Tara! Thank heavens she was there. So part of the prophecy has come to pass and Travers is too single-minded (thankfully) to see other possibilities. Dang, these last few chapters were tense. Can't wait to see the Watchers Council comes down. And yay, money!

Author's Response: Thank you! I second your Yay for Tara. Travers is wrong about everything he says in that speech, glad that came through!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 25

I wondered how you were going to take care of things, and I must say I am NOT disappointed. You rock.

Author's Response: That's a huge, huge compliment. I was very worried. On another note, Travers is extremely wrong about the coming back from the dead thing.

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 25

Go Tara - my hero!! Great chapter - the previous chapter was so creepy I was a little worried the creepiness would continue longer than my heart could take.

Author's Response: I don't want to creep out your heart! In case I don't update soon, the characters are in for a peaceful time. The story is wrapping, so there will only be about two or maybe three chapters left.

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 25

Absolutely loved this chapter! It's not often you read Tara saving the day, and you did it so well. Travers...what a smug bastard! Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I wanted to do a call back to when Tara sacrifices herself to save Dawn by getting brain sucked by Glory. I thought that was so amazing of the character being that she hardly knew Dawn. What Tara does there is lost by the end of the episode because Glory finds them anyway, but I've always thought of her as a heroic character.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 25

I'm so glad they're safe. At least, I hope they are. I'm looking forward to more soon.

Author's Response: The story is wrapping up, and they are heading into a really peaceful period. I think there may only be two chapters left.

Reviewer: claudia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2011 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1

You had me on the edge of my chair that entire last chapter. And the whole moving forward by a year? Excellent! It really added to the mood of the story. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh...My! I literally had a physical reaction from this chapter! Goosebumps and everything! Your portrayal of Wesley was creepy and throughout the chapter I was on the edge of my seat reading what he was doing to everyone, and then he goes and shoots himself in the tub--completely unexpected. Brava, lady!

Author's Response: That is amazing praise. Thank you! I came up with the tub thing first and rewrote the lead up to it a dozen times in my head before I came up with that scene. Glad it kept you in suspense.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 24

Creepy, wicked Wesley. Bastard still seems to have some way off kilter emotional compass, but I can only hope he has underestimated Buffy. Thank god he didn't actually assault her. Bastard. Hope Tara may have a trick or two up her sleeve as well. Update soon.

Author's Response: He does have a weird moral code. The scary thing about Wesley was that he felt bad about what happened to Spike not because it was a tragedy, but because of why he did it. I thought it was more effective for him not to attack her; also, I hate writing or reading that sort of thing. You get the idea of the depth of his betrayal without it, I think. Anyway, thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 24

Wasn't expecting that! More please!

Author's Response: Thank You for commenting!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 24

Yikes! Eeep! Boo! Wesley sucks! Wow, he deserves way more than just a quick exit. I'll be checking for updates like every hour because this cliffhanger is filling me up with anxiety! Your evil. ;-)

Author's Response: Don't mean to be evil, but you know, vampire. I will not be posting a new chapter until at least the end of the week, I haven't even started on this one yet. Sorry, don't be anxious. Also, thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 24

Wow.. heartbreaking.
If Buffy drowns even for just a minute another Slayer is born, right? But in the hands of such Council I don't like the idea very much.
Beautifully written chapter..

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, another slayer would be called if she died for even a minute.

Reviewer: nerfherder Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 24

WHAT!!?? I was totally not expecting that!! Wesley's a bit touched, isn't he?? Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Wesley is touched. Glad I could throw in another twist, hope it isn't getting too out there. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh, this was riveting! You managed to make it horrifying and grotesque. I felt so horrible for all of them with the exception of Wesley, but you maybe even made me feel a bit sorry for him in some twisted way. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you, I really wanted this to be creepy and suspenseful. Wesley really does love Buffy in his own deranged way, and he can't bear to watch her die, so he concocted this way of killing her while acting out some wish fulfillment on his part. Thank you for the comment and for reading this!

Reviewer: cammi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 24

like it

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 23

Oh dear.. Wesley. Has he gone crazy or what?
Loved the descriptions in this chapter! Very vivid.
can't wait to read some more..

Author's Response: Wesley is crazy, but he's acting on orders of the council.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 23

Oh dear.. Wesley. Has he gone crazy or what?
Loved the descriptions in this chapter! Very vivid.
can't wait to read some more..

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you liked the descriptions. As always in this story, I was describing a real place.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 23

Wesley lost his mind! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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