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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 3

Honestly, though I know it's going to be Spuffy, I can speak from real life experience that the sister is the last to know. High school is a challenging place and you need to hang on to the people that make it bearable. Update soon.

Author's Response: I've had a similar personal experience as well, so I completely agree. It's often hard to see objectively when you're so close to someone. Thanks!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter 3

It's something new and I'm veeery curious about where this is going..
I do understand Buffy. Being too close, you sometimes might not see what's under your nose, but just the same... I mean.. hell.. the guy you're falling for ends up being gay? yikes :D And the whole out of the loop with her brother...
can't wait to see the conversation between the two :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far! I hope it will exceed your expectations. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2011 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 3

I do understand where Buffy is coming from--she's very young. You're portraying the situation realistically, especially her feeling of being alienated from the two people in the world she cares about most.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. That's exactly what I was going for. Thanks for reading!!

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