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Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2011 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

oh dear... It really is hard to approach with such a question, isn't it?
and its sad to see how something like that feels like you don't know people you thought you did.
Xander didn't answer the question, but then again, Will came just then... Maybe Xand knows something.... and would not share because.... er, i'll just stop guessing :)
can't wait to read some more... :)

Author's Response: I'm trying to keep people guessing. :) Thanks for the review. Next chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2011 - 05:05 am Title: Chapter 4

Interesting what can be said when nothing is really said. Seems to me our girl needs to chat with Will. Only a matter of time. Update soon!

Author's Response: You read my mind. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2011 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter 4

I love where this story is going. The confusion and hestation Buffy has about asking Xander is great because it seems so real. How would you go about asking someone you thought you knew something this big?

Author's Response: Exactly. It's a really tough thing, especially for a fifteen year old. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2011 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter 4

It's painful to see how isolated she is from them; it seems previous to this her relationship with Will was closer than her relationship with Xander, but afterward it was strained to nothing.
I like how everyone at school seems accepting of a relationship between two boys. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: The issue of acceptance is something that will come up again. That is all I will say about that, don't wanna give too much away. Thanks for the review!

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