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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 - 07:22 am Title: Chapter 9

Gotta say, there are still a few things not quite adding up here. One of these days, they'll get to the bottom. Update soon.

Author's Response: Just posted the next chap! Things should begin to make sense soon. I hope...Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter 9

Just caught up with a few chapters. Looking forward to reading more! :)

Author's Response: I've been posting pretty much every day, which is way fast! And I just posted the next one! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2011 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

My thoughts?... Things can be so very confusing in the situation like this. Xander's behaviour was much like jelousy... And Will? Oh my...
I like it that Buffy is taking her side with her brother, he is her familly after all. But Will has been a friend for a long time... she should probably try and find out what is going on for real, before actually side with one or the other.
loved the update!
I skii quite well myself, so it was funny to see how they had problems with it ;D

Author's Response: Definitely confusing, especially when no on will talk to you about it. Buffy on the show was always putting her family before anyone and that's something I couldn't change about her. She's definitely going to be doing some questioning in the next chapter! I've never actually been skiing before. I've watched people from the lodge, so yeah...Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer!!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2011 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 9

I like that she's coming out of the veil of her crush on Will and she's honestly worried for her brother. The skating scene was great. I was always that kid whose parents didn't have enough money to take me to things like skiiing or skating lessons, so I know what that's like to be the clumsy one out. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: I have still never been skiing and my first attempt at ice skating was much like Will's. things are definitely more serious now, and Buffy is very conflicted about what's going one, especially since she doesn't really understand yet. Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer!

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