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Reviewer: silverforest11 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2011 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 13

yay more please!:)

Author's Response: glad you like! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2011 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter 13

ahh -- cliffhanger!! there's so much suspense with this story, i guess i'm not surprised to see more :)
Can't wait for Will's response...then Buffy's response to that...post more soon please!!

Author's Response: Don't worry, more soon! And it's not like I make you wait all that long...;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 13

I love how you portray Buffy. All her questions and curiosity are of a teenager who hasn't seen all the world and it's still growing. I think you wrote her perfectly to match this situation :-) I also like how she put her foot down, so cute! And good for her for standing up to Riley.

Author's Response: I try and think back to myself at 15 and how I would have handled something like this. Although, I think 15 year olds these days are a tad on the jaded side. But, I'm glad you like! I really want Buffy to mature as the story progresses, and part of that is her starting to stand up for herself and really start asking questions. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 13

That was a great chapter, beautiful moment between them. You're really seeing the love the characters already have for each other.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed. I really felt there needed to be a special moment between them that wasn't romantic before they can progress. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 13

Some questions answered, now off to see the explanation of Spike's about the phone number of that waiter :D
I liked this chapter very much. Poor Xander :( I wish some people weren't so mean and mind their own business...

Author's Response: Definitely poor Xander! It's interesting because I've had gay friends that are very open about their sexuality, and those who are more like Xander and that's something I want to address. More soon, thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 13

Yep, that answered some of my questions nicely. Can't wait to see Will's response to Buffy's comment.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad it did! More soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 13

I love the lighthearted way you put in that cliffhanger. I giggked a littlke seeing that particular scene in my head.

Author's Response: I had the idea, and I was like, YES that's it! Especially since the story has been so serious for the past few chapters.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful cliffhanger for this story. This story is ansgt, and that is such a lighthearted way to leave it. I mean I can just see that scene in my head, and it makes me giggle a little.
That being said, I really hope that is what you were going for with the cliffhanger.
Wow, is Riley even jerkier in this story that the show.

Author's Response: I never like Riley, really for no reason at all, so I can't help but make him a bit of a jerk. But, I hope it's not too much. I don't want him to be unrealistically jerky, just ignorant teenage boy jerky.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 13

I love the ending. Can't wait to read Spike's reaction. I have a feeling he's going to roll on the floor laughing - literally. But I wouldn't be surprised if he announced he was bi.

Thanks for updating so frequently!

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see...:) Thanks for the review!

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