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Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2011 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 15

Really sweet chapter! I love how he's so open and honest with her and she's just taking it all in. Being a teenager can be very difficult at times and having somebody to talk to who is supportive is always such a help. Hopefully Xander will realize that!

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! I always felt that Spike was very open with her on the show, or would have been if she was more receptive to it. Xander...we'll see about him. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 15

My two ex boyfriends are bi-sexual and they both told me that. So I can't really be more open to this story than I am now LOL :D
I loved the update! As a painter myself I appreciate the way you wrote about Will painting. That moment between them was very sweet and not overly done so. Realistic :) Loved it :)
Can't wait to read some more!

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you like. I am a painter as well, so I'm imparting a lot of my own experience into that part of the story. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 15

First off, I have no issues with him being bi-sexual. You are attracted/ love who you are attracted/love, that's that. Labels are for jars and boxes not people. (Sorry, I know this part belonged on the last chapter). Secondly, I'm glad Will is confiding in Buffy. Even though Xander is gay, he seems sort of closed minded himself. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I think so to, about the label thing. It really doesn't matter. Xander kind of has a narrow view of the world right now, so that's something he has to work through. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 08:58 am Title: Chapter 15

Love their tentative growing friendship. Things are clearly on the change and Xander may still be out in the dust. Lovely potential. Update soon!

Author's Response: Glad you think so. Things can't progress too quickly! I have some things coming up for Xander...Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: PinkSatin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter 15

I think this chapter did a great job. Although I don't know how smoothly a converstation would be, as seeing as I'm a woman but explain it either of my parents was harder for myself than it was for them to accept.. But on the other hand. I do see Xander's issue with it. Very well it seems as if you have both sides of a situation possible in the story. Keep up the amazing writing :) I'm enjoying this story so much I keep praying for updates :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Like the last chapter, I revised it about twenty times to make sure it didn't sound stupid. Xander and Will are both dealing with their sexuality in very different ways. I think these days, even with homosexuality being accepted, and almost sensationalized, by the media, it's still extremely difficult for teens to deal with. I'm glad you like it so much! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter 15

I like how you show how comfortable they are with each other.
Also shy Will is cute.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad. And shy Will is always wonderful! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Kaitlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 06:46 am Title: Chapter 15

I am in love with this story! Every day I check all day long until an update is posted. You're a fantastic writer, and being a bisexual woman, you did the conversation very well. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'll be checking all day tomorrow!!

Author's Response: Wow. You flatter me! It's funny, because I've never considered myself a great writer. I'm more of a visual artist. This is my first foray into fan fiction. Anyway, next update may come later tonight! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter 15

this was perfect.

Author's Response: :) Glad you think so. Seems I was all nervous for no reason. Thanks for reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 04:49 am Title: Chapter 15

I liked it, not too fluffy. I'm glad both Buffy and Will have someone to talk to. I'm just worried about Xander.

Author's Response: Buffy and Will are obviously becoming closer. As far as Xander goes, I have some things coming up for him...so stay tuned! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: hulettwyo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter 15

I think you wrote this beautifully. I can picture them in my head. I love how they can talk to each other about anything and how honest Will is with her. Love it.

Author's Response: I'm really happy you think so! I always felt Spike was very forthcoming with Buffy in the show, she just never wanted to hear it then. In this, she obviously does. Thanks for the review!!

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