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Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 17

I know Xander was a major jerk but this shows me this is a boy who really hates himself right now. He's very much on the edge to reject such an important friendship. Can't imagine how alone he feels. As for Buffy, at least Will is there to make it all better!

Author's Response: Oh absolutely, his behavior is totally rooted in self-loathing. I'm glad that you interpreted it that way, because that's exactly what I was going for. He's not the bad guy, even though he's been an ass. He has lots of issues to deal with! As for Buffy and Will..;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 17

This chapter was great. It seems like Hank knows more about the nature of Xander and Will's relationship than he's letting on, automatically assuming Will isn't Buffy's boyfriend. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Well, Hank has met Will before and doesn't really care for him, so he's just trying to stir up trouble. Doesn't necessarily mean he knows...:) More soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter 17

ahh.... a pure relief to escape from that horerible thing that was Buffy's birthday dinner :)
Hank is purely rude man, and Xander is becomming angrier at all the world by the minute it seems. He really should speak to someone...
I think that the pink rose Will gave Buffy was sweeeet! :D And her father gave her something of Tiffany's? Huh.. buying her love I guess.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
No, really - CAN'T wait :)

Author's Response: Now onto the good stuff! Xander does need to speak to someone. I have some plans in that area...and yes, Hank is always trying to buy her love. Next chapter will possible be up late late tonight, and if not then definitely tomorrow. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter 17

I hope that was the wake up call Xander needed, making Buffy cry on her B-day. Shame on him,
God Hank is a jack-@$$, ain't he.


Author's Response: Xander will come around eventually...and Hank is definitely a jackass. I hope it wasn't too much, but I actually know people like that. :/ Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JJ Dawson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter 17

I'm loving the story, but I'm wondering when the Spuffy Lovin going to happen? I'm getting anxious here for Spike to tell Buffster he loves her or something...

Author's Response: I have a very strong love for long, drawn out Spuffy stories...;) I hope not too long, but I'm not making any promises, can't rush it! In any case, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 06:20 am Title: Chapter 17

Excellent chapter, can't wait for part two!

Author's Response: Part two coming very soon! Glad you liked! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter 17

Love him. Such a good reason to have 2 cars at awkward family gatherings. So nice of him to always save her. Honestly, how cold he not be falling. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Writing the end of that chapter made me smile a lot. Thanks for the review!

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