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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2011 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter! I didn't think the story was dragging but I'm everyone appreciates a little action :) Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response: I think I probably felt like it was dragging because I've had less time to write recently...But, I'm glad you don't think so! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2011 - 05:33 am Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 26

Good chapter! I could see how Spike was hurt. Spike and Xander are both 2 stubborn bulls. Now, Buffy & Spike are playing with fire. Spike has to get his head out of denial land fast!

Author's Response: Lots of things to come! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 26

this was beautifully done! The ending was filled with emotions that fit perfectly. If you ask me, I loved this chapter... and can't wait to read what happens next...

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it! More to come soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 26

enjoyed. I'm glad Xander has finally realized he needs to sort things out

Author's Response: Glad you like! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 26

This has a lot of stuff going on, things getting physical between Buffy and Will was sort of inevitable. I like the way you paired that with the information about Xander's trip and Will's bitterness there.
It creates suspense on a few different levels.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 26

I liked this chapter. I think the pace will start to pick up once graduation comes. I don't know how they can maintain any relationship once they are on opposite sides of the US, I suppose they can call and use web videos....
I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store for us. I know you said Will is more affectionate when he's been drinking, so I'm wondering if that is the only reason he kissed Buffy.

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see...;) I don't want to give anything away yet! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 26

i'm not sure it's dragging perse, 'cause there's a lot to get out about the characters, not necessarily the plot just yet. i'm still confused why xander has basically cut himself off from his best friend for six months. and i can understand will's anger regarding xander. unfortunately, it makes it all that much easier to leave it behind. and anya - she's right about so many things. how will buffy copy once he's gone (cause he's gonna leave - as much as he cares about her, he's gonna leave)? i can see her going down two separate roads - the self-destructive (want, take, have, etc) or the depressive one ... here's to hoping i'm wrong ...

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see...;) I don't want to give anything away just yet! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 26

I have been waiting for the big moment when Spike decided to leave and find himself but am very glad that Buffy and he are working out some differences before they go. Hopefully they will come to a resolution soon. Great chapter.

Author's Response: They still have the whole summer to go before he leaves...so there's still a lot of stuff to work out! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter 26

Thank god they are finally kissing! I thot I might blow up from all there UST. Anya is right, they are in a relationship, and since it is all likely to go to hell anyway, they may as well enjoy themselves now. Cause I like reading about it, and they would surely be less miserable if they could just be and stop having to guard themselves so damn closely. College isn't forever, and sometimes, all you can do is try. Hope she doesn't push him away. Update soon.

Author's Response: They can only keep their hands off each other for so long! You'll have to stay tuned and see what happens...;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: IamGhost Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 26

Oh, I missed a chapter...
Anyways, I like where this is going. Curious about that road trip and I completely understand Will. Loved the last bit of Spuffy action :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked! Spuffy action will continue in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cheyenne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter 26

I like this story. I wait for each and every chapter, cause I'm hooked, but I agree, we are kind of in a holding pattern right now. I liked this chapter, and hope to get more soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad I've hooked you in! I'm trying to pick up the pace a bit more in the coming chapters. Thanks for the review!

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