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Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2012 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 29

Please update!

Reviewer: mila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2011 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 29

Hey, long time no update
anyway... i was wondering, is this story in any way related to the French movie Les Amours Imaginaires ?

Reviewer: Angellia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2011 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 29

This story is great! So moving and different.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2011 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 29

Great chapter, I love all the Buffy and Will fluffiness. I'm still curious about how their long distance relationship is going to work. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Glad you like the fluff, it's been making me feel like I ate too much sugar...Anyway, the story will only be a few more chapters and the sequel will show us how the long distance thing works out (hope that wasn't giving anything away). Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lunna798 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 29

**steps out of Lurkerville**
Just wanted to say that in no way is this story boring. I happen to love long stories but more than that i love great story progression. There is nothing more disappointing then when stories start out with a really great premise but do not follow a natural progression of events. Sometimes I feel like authors rush to the Spuffy too soon or resolve issues too quickly to appease their readers and more often than not it results in forced feeling and leaves me feeling very disappointed. You have not done that at all. I look forward to your updates and I do have to say that the Spike/other warning makes me wince cause i have a feeling it is going to mean trouble. But I am curious how you handle it since you have been doing such a great job so far.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking the story!! I feel the sam way about authors rushing Spuffy and that's exactly what I didn't want to do. As for the Spike/other warning, I should probably take that out for this story, cause I will be ending the story soon (it feels likes it should be in two separate parts) and continuing it in a sequel... the warning is for the sequel. They have some less than happy things in their future...that's all I'll say about that ;) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 29

I hope in the sequel it will be Xander having most of the angst. I know with them being across the country from each other that our Spuffy couple will have their difficulties because I really don't want them to have to go through too much (if any) heartbreak.

Author's Response: I wish I could reassure you about the next one...but all will end well, I promise!!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 29

Cute, realistic, very good.

Author's Response: Glad you like! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 29

They really have nailed the happy, lovey-dovey high school couple. And I love Joyce trying to have the talk with Buffy. I'm impressed she's held out this long. Good for her. Looking forward to more. Angst or not. Update soon.

Author's Response: That's exactly what I was going for with the high school coupleyness! Thanks for the review!!

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