Reviews For The Shadow Gallery
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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad Spike is okay (and so are the others). Yeah, almost loosing something makes you think about things, help you decide like Buffy did.
Enjoyed.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2011 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter. So glad that everyone's all right.

A couple of comments:
1. Probably just a oversight, but you mention that he has no shirt on in the evening after the operation. In the morning, though, when Buffy climbs into bed with him, you describe how he feels her tears through the thin shirt he's wearing. Does Fred help him put one on?

2. You've got a typo here: "She had momentarily forgot all of the events...." Should be "She had momentarily forgotten...."

Thank you for posting. I'm really enjoying this fic. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, this was actually pointed out to me by another reader. That's what I get for taking a day long break in the middle of the chapter lol. I'm also still sick so that's probably another reason for the mistakes. I'll fix this as soon as I can, hope it didn't ruin the chapter for you. I'll be on a trip until next thursday, then its back to constant updates. Sorry for the mistakes. :)

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2011 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 8

Love the story, great place to leave off...update soon.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2011 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 8

Glad Buffy is giving their relationship a chance! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2011 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter, I'm glad Spike is doing well. Can't wait to find out what the 'surprise" is and what Spike and Willow planned as his first date.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2011 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 8

Ahh.. the scar. And seems life with Buffy and Spike is ok for now. enjoyed.

Author's Response: haha i love that scar. it needed to be adressed, am i right?!

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