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Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 10:55 pm Title: Reinforcements

Spectacular. I hope you consider continuing this terrific series.

Author's Response: Thank you. For a while there I didn't think I'd ever come back to it, but a nomination of at the Absence of Light Awards really lit a fire under me to get it done.

Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2011 - 09:44 am Title: Reinforcements

Your descriptions are *golden*: "He felt savagely real and alive when he got back on the street, slashing and weaving through the slow parade of weekend foot traffic with warm blood on his knuckles. He licked his lips and stroked his hair. Lit the night up with a sinister leer."

And this: "As they closed in on the giant prat, Spike got that odd sensation again — the one he always felt whenever they fought side-by-side. It was as though there were a secret conversation going on between their bodies, carved in particles of air. "

Your Spike characterization was just perfect too. You'd almost swear this was dialogue from the show. I loved the peek inside his head & also his "evil errands."

Very interesting premise, can't wait to see where you go with this. Please keep writing. I could read this series forever.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really loved these characters on the show (and particularly their witty repartee). It has been a lot of fun writing this series so far.

Reviewer: Iamme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 - 04:01 am Title: Reinforcements

Great job! Loooove it so far, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you, Iamme!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 - 02:47 am Title: Reinforcements

Oh, that anonymous review was from me. Didn't notice I had been logged out. LOVE thi story!!! Had to say it again. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks again, Enemy of Reality!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2011 - 02:44 am Title: Reinforcements

Very interesting, very unexpected development! I wonder if the candle thingy Spike touched in the basement is to blame for the night's anomalies. Also, the term 'Magic Bollocks' made me laugh! *gg* I love how the whirlwind of emotions in the chapter... there were lines that made me smile and those that tugged at my heart for how sad they are. Amazing Spike voice! And equally fantastic portrayal of their relationship. I can't help but be excited to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think that the best part of the show was the way it could swing so smoothly between different emotions and tones, and that goes for Buffy and Spike's relationship as well, you know? I was definitely going for that, so it really makes me thrilled that you picked up on it!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2011 - 12:24 pm Title: Reinforcements

That was one of the best use of song lyrics in a story I've read. Really enjoying the surrealism in this installment of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you, Minx! Those lyrics just seemed oddly perfect, you know?

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2011 - 04:41 am Title: Reinforcements

Well that is an interesting turn. Glad they are forced to work together, even though I don't quite know where they've ended up. I love his tiny bit of contempt, to think that it would be enough for her to dream of saving him after he was gone. Selfless and selfish at the same time. But he didn't dust, and now they have to figure it out together. Pretty cool, that. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, BuffyRat.

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