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Reviewer: HJP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2013 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

Thanks so much for writing this! It's great!! I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I laughed, I cried, once I started reading I couldn't stop! Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: spufster Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2011 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

Ms Jane, you have done so well by the future fix category. Your sense of humor really shines through in Buffy, she remains the hero without being all speechifying Buffy. And your Spike. Oh lord, I love your Spike, I love his devotion without all the strings attached that all men seem to have with Buffy. This story is paced very well too, I don't hate your slayers either, they have distinct personalities needs and desires. I gotta say, I want to know more about Sonny and Buffy. Please do continue writing this great story, it deserves an ending befitting the fantastic 20 chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much Spufster for such a complete and thoughtful review. I'm so pleased you appreciate Buffy in this story. I will definitely be continuing the story for as long as I can do it justice. I hope that means to the end. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

Sorry about joining the party so late...interesting start. Onto the next chapter

Author's Response: No apologies necessary! Glad you're reading!

Reviewer: lovesparklys Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

enjoying your story....very true to the characters. I like the building anticipation leading up to them meeting and him thinking the older lady was Buffy lol.

Author's Response: Thanks. :-) Yeah, my obsession with this story is being true to the characters. Sometimes I think I forget everything else in the service of making them true to themselves. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Matinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2011 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

Hi! I am really loving this so far and can't wait to read more. You're characterisation is spot on and this seems to be developing into a interesting plot line.

Author's Response: I am loving the feedback on characterization! Do you mean BUffy, Spike or both? I think Buffy can be a bit trickier to depict and she deserves to be captured correctly. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: victoria2 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2011 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

ooooh... I can tell that I'm really going to enjoy this one. More please?

Author's Response: You asked and you shall receive. Chapter 2 forthcoming... Thanks SO much for reviewing. It encourages me to continue writing.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

I saw this story posted @ EF but several chapters ahead. Good to see it hear now I hope to stay up to date with the updates. I'm way behind reading EF updates.

Being decades after Sunnydale is gone - Dawn is getting older, Buffy not? Sounds like that.
Slayers dying without new ones - so the slayer line isn't going through them.
I like the start - hopeful the Buffy/other will be bearable, I don't like reading it. (If it gets too much I'll wait some chapters or till the end. Makes it easier to read for me.)
And my spuffy heart hopes Spike is wrong about Buffy not loving him...
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading cordykitten! I need to change the summary and description on EF, because the Buffy/Other happens before the story begins, so its not actually within the story. Thanks very much for the review. I wish everyone that read updates would review. Cheers

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

I really like it so far, and can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks Michelle! It is so wonderful getting feedback like this. It really encourages the writers on these archives to keep writing, which is what we all want them to do! Thanks again.

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