Reviews For Chasing a Dream
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Reviewer: Puddinhead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2012 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

Ha! Nice way to end it. I love chapters that end like that (with the cliffhangery thing - so that you don't have to look up what the hell I'm talking about)

You do the father-daughter interaction very nicely. It's not ovely explained - but has an easy going, teasing nature that feels very natural.

Now that I've gotten to know the horny little old lady a little bit, I'm looking for her in every chapter :)

Author's Response: It's always fun to leave things hanging. ;) Hee... thanks for the consideration, btw!

That's exactly what I wanted it to be. Awesome. *g*

Hahaha! She was a lot of fun to write. I wish there had been more space in the story to fit her in. Thank you for being made of win, Puddin!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2011 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter 9

Love the electric charge between them. I wonder if he's figured out that he can't stay away from her yet, and that besides him being a love sick fool at heart and that they are already indelibly connected, there is probably going to be a reason for that. After all, if you can't beat them, join them! And I suppose, parents just don't understand. :) Awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: There will always be a strange sort of awareness between them, I figure. Spike is in denial over her so far but he'll have to face the fact he keeps being drawn to her despite the fact he promised himself he wouldn't. There is a reason for their connection, of course. :) Hank is very protective of Buffy and he only wants the best for her. Like most most parents. Doesn't mean Buffy always understands. More soon, promise! Thank you for being wonderful!!! :)

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2011 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

Not a good day for Buffy. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: A definite suckage! :D Thank you for being awesome!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2011 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 9

Buffy is dreaming of Spike again, huh? Heartbreaking to see little William so devastated (and Cecily so ignorant)...
*grins* I enjoyed Buffy's talk with her dad. Too bad (in Buffy's eyes) that Spike has a bad timing. *gg* Or that Buffy's inner warning systems needs still improvement, not warning her in time.

Author's Response: She definitely is and doesn't have a clue. I figured Cecily wouldn't see farther than the tip of her own nose and I wanted William to have that unrequited crush just like he had in canon.
Hee... I had fun writing that. As I had with the interaction in the next chapter between Buffy/Spike/Hank. That should be fun. ;)
It definitely does. She was too distracted by her own ire. lol Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2011 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 9

More William dreams and now speak of the..... LOL
enjoyed

Author's Response: Oh the next interaction should be interesting. Let's see how Buffy handles it. ;) Thank you for the yummy review!!!

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