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Reviewer: Puddinhead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2012 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 13

This was a nice change of pace from the angst and it was a good reminder that the two have a connection beyond the kind of mom-death-bond thing. You write Anya's dialogue very well and she helps add a lighter touch to the tale :)

Author's Response: It can get tedious to write angst all the time, so it's a nice change of pace to put is some more light-hearted scenes/lines from time to time. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2011 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 13

I love how the real Spike is coming out now that they are getting to know each other. How subtle his attempt to ask her over. I wonder if he has realized that he misses her, and that maybe they need each other aside from this whole crazy situation. Our little cuddle buddies. :) And I do wonder a bit about Ellen, though I like that Buffy is trying so hard not to like her. At this point it is too early to tell if she is part of the conspiracy, but she is surely interesting. Fabulous dynamics all the way around. Update soon!

Author's Response: They both lower their defenses, more and more now that they're getting to know each other better. They don't even fully realise they're doign it. Spike just likes having her around and even though he knows of the potential danger in it, he just can't help it. Hee... I love that you called them cuddle bunnies! :) There is some interesting interaction between them in the next chapter, and I think you might like it. Oh, Buffy really doesn't want to like Ellen! lol She's not to keen on sharing her father's affection with anyone else, which is natural since it's been just the two of them for years. Glad you liked the chapter! :D Thank you for the terrific review!!! I promise more will be up soon.

Reviewer: Spuffy6 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 13

Forgot to sign in, so im posting my comment again :)

love your story so far and how their relationship is progressing. curious about ellen and if shes more then she seems. anya is always good for a laugh, vengeance demon maybe? keep it coming, i get so excited when i see an update!

Author's Response: Thank you again! Now I know who the lovely reader was. ;) I'm glad you're enjoying the updates!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 13

love your story so far and how their relationship is progressing. curious about ellen and if shes more then she seems. anya is always good for a laugh, vengeance demon maybe? keep it coming, i get so excited when i see an update!

Author's Response: I always love hearing that you're enjoying! :) The next chapter is full of Spuffy goodness, so I think you'll like it. Hmmm... Ellen. I guess we'll see if she's just a regular librarian or if she's got something more going for her. She is human though. Unlike Anya. ;) I promise more will be up soon. Thank you for reviewing, lovely reader!!! :D

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

So Ellen was visiting Hank. Wonder how she fits in with what's going on. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Ellen also has a role to play in this though she's unaware of it herself. More soon, promise. :) Thank you for being lovely!!!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 13

Say yes buffy

Author's Response: Hee... she shouldn, shoudn't she? ;) Thank you for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 13

I think hank was totally series about the shotgun.
Hmm, I got those clues about Anya, but is it to throw us off her real scent. I'm now wondering if you added those clues to make us think she is a veneage demon when she is something else. Tricky you.
If she is a venage demon, it seems like she is angling to make Buffy one too, or is that one my imangtion.

Author's Response: Haha, he really was!
Buffy won't be a vengance demon. That, I can assure you of. But I love how suspicious you are! ;) Anya is definitely not human, I think I can tell you that. She has an important role to play in the story, which we'll see more of in the future chapters. Thank you for being wonderful!!! :)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful chapter. It was funny hearing Buffy refer to Xander as Alex, I love that little touch. Sounds like Anya might be a vengeance demon in your story, or is that a red herring? I love the juxtaposition of her worldliness with Buffy's age-appropriate insecurity. Beautifully done.

Also, if you want to bounce ideas off of me to help with the writers' block, e-mail me.

Author's Response: Hee... well, Buffy wouldn't know how friends call him, would she? You wouldn't believe how weird it felt for her to call him Alex when I was writing it. lol The wish thing was a hint, so I can tell you Anya is not human. ;) I'm happy you like her!! I thought that Anya's bluntness to Buffy's naivete would be fun to write and I was right.

Thank you!! That's really nice of you. :) I might drop you an e-mail once I get my thoughts in order. lol

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 13

It's very hot here too but not 38°. We were happy not to get thunderstorms yesterday but who knows about today. It's rumbling...
*cookies for your muse* - or would (s)he like an ice?

It was fun 'watching' Anya go after Xander. He didn't complain. ;)

Ellen seems like a nice gal - sounds as if Buffy would like her in the long run.

Loved Buffy's and Spike's interaction too. All in all in short - enjoyed the update.


Author's Response: Oh, I love thunderstorms! I'd actually be thankful for one of those right now as it would make the heat subside for a bit. Hee... ice would be so much better right now! :D

Poor Xander. He had no idea what he's gotten himself into. lol But we know he won't mind. ;)

Buffy's determined not to like her, but I'm sure they'll find interests in common.

Happy to hear that. :D Thank you for the delightful review!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 13

Seems the shells they have built are slowing being torn down.. enjoying the development of their relationship
And Anya.. what's not to love.. and the "wish" ?
Helen.. still a mystery woman. Likes to cook.. well endowed... divorcee.. and librarian. The one Spike visited?
enjoyed..

Author's Response: A very good observation. Indeed, they are slowly revealing more about themselved and they don't even realise it. The next chapter is full of Spuffy goodness, so I think you'll like it.
I love Anya! She's a fun character. Hmm... the 'wish.' We'll see what comes off that.
Haha, I loved how you summed her up! :D I can assure you that Spike and her have never met before. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :)

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