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Reviewer: Puddin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2012 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 34

The bit with Dru and the dead baby was so well done - you weren't afraid to go there. She comes off as very creepy and yet pitiable too,

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) I wasn't sure if people would take it well, but I wrote and didn't want to cut anything out.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2012 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 34

Just love their dynamic, and the fact that she is still a horrible driver. And interesting developments in the Angelus camp. Gotta wonder where that will ultimately lead, doesn't seem like Dru has it in her to deceive, but she's clearly surprised us before. Poor Xander, sorta forgot about him. Another ripple in this whole world. Awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, Buffy and her driving skills are the stuff of legends. As for Dru, who really knows what's going on in her mind? we'll have to wait and see whose side she's really on. Promise more will be up as soon as I can finish it. :) Thank you for being sweet!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 34

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) Hope you'll enjoy the next one as well.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 34

Mmmh I don't think Spike will let Buffy drive his car again soon or teach her. *gg*

Would be good to have Dru as an ally, working against Angelus. Doesn't sound as if it will be certain what she'll decide.

Heh the road trip really sounds not boring - looking forward to more fun.

Author's Response: Hee... I'm pretty sure he learned better. She did warn him though, so it's his fault for being persistent. ;)
Dru's unpredictable. Guess we'll have to wait and see where her loyalties lie.
Haha, glad to hear that! I certainly hope it won't be boring at all. Thank you for being lovely!! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 34

Dru is not a compliant IMO as Eline thinks.. China is pretty far away from Cleveland and Dru has already helped Spike and Potential Buffy IIRC.. nice and lengthy diversion.. She did say that when the Sun was the highest it would be a problem and I assume that is the Summer and maybe even the solstice?
Nice to hear the true confessions from those two.. and hopefully more things to come with those things previously mentioned.
enjoyed..

Author's Response: Dru is a wild card. It's hard to tell what's her intention, whose side she's really on or whether she's siding with anyone at all. Only time will tell. ;) Good job on pinpointing the meaning of Dru's warnings. She was indeed talking about the summer solstice. More Spuffy interactions coming up. Hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as well!! :)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 34

This chapter was amazing. Loved the bit about the skittles and the yummy pickles. Him trying to teach her to drive--it was such a real, teenage thing. Then you slam us with Dru and Eline and a dead baby. Oh my God. As a parent, that just hurt my heart. I have a rule that a writer can't kill a kid for unnecessary reasons in a story. You passed the test. That was gripping and chilling. Their dialogue was so perfect when they were lying in bed. This is the most mature, fully realized story you've written. Thanks for posting.

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) I wanted to kick off the chapter with something more lighthearted before I delved into the more serious interaction between Buffy and Spike and a darker Dru/Eline/Angelus scene. So awesome to hear you found it gripping and chilling! That baby death wasn't for the kicks, so I'm glad to hear it didn't come off that way. Also, thank you so much for the amazing compliment at the end of the review!! That made my day. :) My plan is to make the next story even better!

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 34

You were right, this was lovely. Maybe sometime soon Buffy can sneek a peak at some poetry. And do... those things. Also, I really enjoyed Spike teaching Buffy to drive. I really am enjoying their relationship and having them make up after Spike's departure. Yeah I think it's pretty safe to say that I love this whole story and I can't wait to see where you go with it. =) Looking forward to more of that road trip goodness!

Author's Response: Glad you think so! :) Ah, 'those things'. Being in such close proximity to each other will wreak some havoc on them both, that's for sure. After all, we know that when Spike and Buffy are together sparks start to fly. There will be loads more Spuffy road trip goodness in the next chapter as well, so I hope you'll like it! :) Thank you for the sweet review!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 34

Ravenously awaiting the next chapter. More Spuffy!!!

Author's Response: More Spuffy indeed. :D Thank you for being awesome!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 34

The image of Dru rocking a dead baby is quite distrubing, good job.

Author's Response: Well, Dru IS very disturbed. :) Thank you for reviewing!!!

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