Wohoo! Dirty little start. I like it :) I like the twist at the end too. Wouldn't mind you throwing some more Fuffy in the mix later - all in good fun. Enjoying this saucy story so far. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, what a great review! I like that you used the word saucy!

Love that she's had the thing for William the whole time. And that she has a thing going on with Faith. I think it will be very interesting if William does move in. Perhaps the girls should put on a show to help convince him. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it!

I enjoyed this chapter:). It was cute, I liked reading it. The reviewers who didnt may just be a bit uptight? I do agree with minx in some ways? But I'm hoping I like where you take it.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I really hope you like where I take it too!

Interesting, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon.

Hey, I'm very with the pro-gay story lines, but this was a bit off-putting and I'll tell you why. Buffy comes off as an awful person. It's bad enough when you think she's using a guy sexually, but when you find out it's a girl, that makes it just a little worse. I think because that is such a nightmare scenario for same-sex couples, that notion of "Hey, you're just using me until the right man comes along." It's not sexy, just sort of sad and makes Buffy seem monstrous. Granted, something similar happens in the comic, but I hated it there, too. Sorry to dump on the story. Please don't get discouraged.

Author's Response: Thank you for being honest with me. That was definitely not what I was trying to portray with that chapter. I hope as the story unravals that missunderstanding will be corrected. I really appreciate your insight, I am a very big fan of your work. Thanks again.

Wow. Those reviewers need to calm down. Have they never heard of a plot twist? I'm kind of offended that the idea of two women together made them say ew and poorly comment, since I'm sure they were interested in the sex of the chapter until then and wouldn't have minded if it was a man. And that if Buffy had been canoodling with a guy, they wouldn't immediately assume threesome, but since she's already sleeping with a girl, she must be some crazy sexual deviant (although I'm secretly rooting for a threesome =]). All I'm trying to say is Laur, don't let those uptight reviewers ruin your day. I thought it was very well written and interesting. I hope to see more of it soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, you took the words right out of my mouth. I didn't realize I was going to cause so much controversy since i read a good amount of fics with pairings like this. Thanks for your support!

Yeah, I agree with the previous poster. There really ought to have been a warning on this chapter (and Buffy/Other doesn't cut it, sorry). Ick! Cute premise so it's too bad you had to ruin it. I won't be continuing with this story either. Definitely a let down and a waste of a good idea.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you felt that way. I don't think I ruined it, there is a reason for this direction. Thank you for making me realize I left out the more specific warning.

Great story and wonderful description of Wm's bits. Just wanted you to change a word in this sentence "they heard a loan pair" the word loan to lone. The meanings are different and it is such a great story I don't want distraction to it. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, it really meant a lot to me. I actually just went in and fixed that and a few other mistakes that I missed before. I'm so glad you liked it, I've gotten some mixed feelings.