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Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2017 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 5

Having this OC and giving Xander a new girlfriend is nice - poor Xander so often gets the full out "jerk" treatment. Nice for a change.

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2012 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 5

Love the Amy Yip reference! Also loved this line, very Xander:
"The guy is a chocolate eclair and a hand job away from absolute evil."

Not sure Xander would've 'taken up with' Spike quite so quickly, even for video games and a TV, tho... I guess that was in the last chapter, but anyway... I do think that Xander and Spike could've been good friends, if Xander could've gotten over his hate of the undead, just not sure he would've come around quite that fast, esp. with Buffy crushing on Spike.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the Amy Yip reference and the chocolate eclair joke is probably my favorite thing I ever wrote. In this story, I eluded to the notion that Spike was cooperating with them long before season four. He helps Buffy save the babies from the mayor during "Band Candy," and he is the one who brings Anyanka to the group to talk about the Ascension because in this version of events, "The Wish," never happens. These were off screen tweaks to imply Spike was much less antagonistic to the group prior to him coming over. Plus, Buffy is relying on the group to keep herself from falling for Spike. That is more explicitly stated later. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2011 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

I really like Dev. She feels real and believable and I'm glad Xander has someone who's really good for him and who encourages him to be more confident in himself. :) A truly lovely chapter! Now I'm curious to see what Spike does with the Du Lac book.

Author's Response: Glad you like Dav! All will be revealed with the du Lac book.

Reviewer: Mooseshug Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2011 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 5

omg, is that a Moloch reference that Willow made? so awesome

Author's Response: Yes, yes it is! You're the first one to catch it, too! Glad you're liking this one!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2011 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great update! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2011 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 5

This is simply a wonderful fic! I read all of it in one sitting and need more! And soon! Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter! I was laughing so loud after reading this line: "The guy is a chocolate eclair and a hand job away from absolute evil." LOL!!!! Priceless!!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like that line, I thought it was funny.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 5

I love it. I love your grasp of the characters; you bring a fresh... playfulness? Tweek? Light to the dark? Anyway, hoozah! New chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think there's a lot of great stuff that's been written with the characters and it's hard to come up with a fresh approach. That's an amazing compliment!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

God, I adore this story (but then, I adore ALL of your stories). Dev is wonderful.

Author's Response: That's a wonderful thing to say. Glad you like Xander's girlfriend!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

Aww, sweet chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter 5

I love Dav. She and Xander are so cute, and I'm glad she's working to be part of their crazy. I hope that Spike finds what he's looking for, and that he can resolve his internal Buffy battle. Only a matter of time. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update as soon as I can.

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