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Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2012 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter 20

"I'm going to need a dentist now, aren't I?" he asked.

LOL!!!!!!!!! Too funny! And also the cockles bit - loved that! Perhaps Willow can hack into some government computers and conjure Spike up some papers.

Author's Response: Glad you laughed! I think Spike would know all about the hot cockles.

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2012 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 20

I thought I had already read and reviewed this, guess not.

Author's Response: Oh, hey, you did. I prematurely posted a chapter and then took it back. Maybe thirty people read it? Anyway, I'm so sorry. I should have a shiny, new chapter up next week.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2012 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 20

Loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2012 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 20

I'm w/ Joyce, I'm like "Are you sure you don't want one more day of rest?". But then again, I'm not a slayer. Buffy and Spike are just so sweet together. I love how she was the one who was disappointed that Spike didn't utilize the clotted cream!

Too bad Xander and Dav's talk was interrupted, they really could use an honest conversation. Dav is definitely caught in a tight, uncomfortable situation. Maybe she should just lay low for awhile. Definitely tricky.

Can't wait until the next chapter! This story is so nerve-wracking. Maggie is so so scary.

Author's Response: I thought of that when I was writing it and it seemed like Buffy would feel her best doing something. Glad you like Buffy and Spike together! Wouldn't you have been disappointed;) Dav stuff will get trickier. Thanks so much for the comment!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2012 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 20

Things are going to stay awkward so long as there are secrets. Hope they can get to Faith in time. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2012 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 20

Congrats on the awards!! I voted for you as well, so I'm glad your awesomeness got recognised. :)
The dynamics between all the characters are fun to watch. Sometimes it's difficult to write scenes with that many characters in them, but you wrote is SO well. Awesome with zero confusion as to who's saying/doing what. Also, great and very appropriate reference to Dr. Mengele. Can't wait to read more!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks honey! That means a lot to me that the crowded scene made sense and was fun to read. I dreaded writing this chapter because of all the characters.

Reviewer: ragpants Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2012 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter 20

Well done! You just keep ratcheting up the tension. The thought of Faith as aSuperSlayerSoldier is chilling.

Eddie and Andrew are priceless as always! Enjoying their interaction very much.


And the morning after tension as everyone tries to figure out where they stand with past and current lovers/relationships feels so very true to life.

And Hee! Spike's inner geek is showing. He looked up the meaning of cockles so he could use the word properly. Riiiiight.

Looking forward to more.


Author's Response: Thanks so much! I imagined Spike looked that word up so he could put it in a poem.

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