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Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2012 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 22

Eeek! Willow!! Bad! I hope she's only looking around and not, you know ... mucking about in there! I loved the banter early in the chapter with Spike - the pissing line just had me rolling - and how true it that?! heehee! So, who killed Maggie and are they coming after Buffy and where is Faith, anyway? Great chapter ... right up to the eeeek-Willow part at the end!

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad I achieved big eeek! with the Willow part.

Reviewer: demona424 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2012 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 22

Yikes and more Yikes! I don't feel at all sorry for Maggie, who would. Wish, that Buffy & Spike could get some sort satisfaction but it's probably best this way. The question is who did, the government or the watchers. And how about Faith? Poor sad Faith.

Then of course there is Xander and Willow. That deserved an extra yikes! Those two have issues they need to resolve. A lot of issues. Xander's are pretty normal, he needs to grow up and not make stupid decisions. But Willow, she is starting to yield those powers over people rather easily. As usual, a great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment!!! It was the government, not the watchers, I can tell you that. About Willow and Xander, I agree completely.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2012 - 07:49 am Title: Chapter 22

Interesting mojo she pulled on Xander. Wonder what that will do. Is she looking for the future, or the present? And where is Faith? So many things left to discover and I hope Xander comes to his senses with Willow. Update soon.

Author's Response: You'll see in the next chapter the nature of the mojo. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 22

It seemed to me that Buffy, Spike, Willow and xander were too cavalier. I mean Buffy and Spike just got out of a bad situation and it did not seem to have any effect on them. No surprise about Xander and Willow. Of course Willow would resort to magic to get what she wants. Interesting chapter.

Author's Response: You're right, they were cavalier. I thought going in as soon as possible would be something Buffy insisted on doing. She acts when things are bad, she doesn't wait. The lasting effect of the terrible situation they escaped will become clearer later. I would argue though, that their relationship itself was a bi-product of captivity. Thanks so much for the thoughtful comment. Hope interesting is good!

Reviewer: ragpants Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 22

Bad Willow! Using magic to solve her problems. Guess she's one who has to learn the hard way that that only leads to badness....

Seems like Spike is making a relatively smooth transition to humanity. He and Buffy seem to be on easy terms about their relationship and relative strengths/weaknesses. Nice to se some good things happen for them.

And Maggie--she meets her fate. Her keepers are leaving no loose ends. But she was so evil, so conscience-less, one almost hoped her end was a bit more tortuous....

Looking forward to seeing more.

Author's Response: Willow is going to learn the hard way not to control people with magic. Spike is making a smooth transition--so far. It will get tougher, later. I can tell you, in case you hadn't guessed, having Lloyd die before her was an incredible torment. Thanks so much for the comment and sticking with the story!

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 22

Maggie is dead but who killed her.
I like how willow is not letting up on Xander, she needs to keep on him.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oooh, what a cliffhanger!!! You're evil. What did Willow do to Xander?? Aah, I wish the next chapter was up already. Love this story! Also, a very good observation about Xander always wanting what he can't have. Very true. The banter between the characters was brilliant and a lot of fun to read as well, which just put cherry on top of the already yummy update sundae. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment! Glad you liked the banter.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 22

Seems someone beat them to the punch.. with Maggie. Gotta be the military? that would take her computer info.
But what has Willow done to Xander now?
enjoyed..

Author's Response: It is the military. Willow has changed Xander's mind--manually.

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