[Report This]Date: 10/05/2011 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yuck ... Buffy.. a pin cushion and test subject.. Riley still seems to have a little humanity and not 100% zombie soldier..
Guess Buffy's blood didn't give any hints to her abilities.. A little majic search by the Scoobies?
Waiting for Maggie to get her dues.. slowly.
enjoyed.
Author's Response: There will be a magic search, but keep in mind Willow is not the virtuoso witch she is in later seasons.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2011 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter 9
It felt like they were almost out of there, and now they are going to be apart. I'm not liking that turn of events too much. Hopefully the outside world will figure out that their friendly fighters need some assistance. Update soon, we can't leave them like that!
Author's Response: I'm glad it seemed like they were really going to escape. I was worried that the situation would seem like a pointless exercise, glad it was suspenseful. Thanks for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2011 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 9
Man maggie is a witch with a capital B.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2011 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 9
So close. Maggie is a witch with a capital B.
Author's Response: No argument here.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2011 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
Buffy and Spike are in a lot of trouble. How on earth will they escape with all that technology?? Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2011 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Seems Buffy is part of the Experimental Group.. Now to see if there is a difference in her blood that science can figure out..
Nice twist.. Maybe Dr. Oliver will be helpful to B/S in the future..
enjoyed..
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2011 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really, really hate Maggie Walsh.
Author's Response: Right on.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2011 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow. Maggie Walsh is even more evil, self-absorbed and conscience-less than she was in the series. Makes for an excellent villain.
Dr.Oliver--hmmm. Can't decide whose side he's on (aside from his own...), or if he has a conscience. (Or maybe he's just taking a slightly different approach to the problem of The Slayer?)
Anyway, interesting chapter. I wonder if they're going to chip Buffy?
Author's Response: They won't chip Buffy, but you're the second person to ask that question. Can't tell you any more, or it will ruin the surprise. Thanks for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2011 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aaaah, I want more!!! I had that tiniest bit of hope that they'd manage to escape, but I suspected you wouldn't make it that easy. ;) I'm SO curious to see what Spike and Buffy will do now, especially since they'll probably be separated.
I loved that you compared that scientist to Angelus. You know, I've always found Adam a bit lame, and wished they treated people running the Initiative as the real villain. It's much more interesting to explore humans that are capable of so much evil, and demons that are victims in the scenario. Love that you're doing that. :)
And also, awesome that you implement those bits of humour into what is otherwise an angsty situation. Can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I always thought Adam was a poorly executed villain, too, so I'm hoping to tweak that in my story. Season four has so much great stuff, but then the Adam stuff comes so thoroughly out of left field. Thank you for the compliment, glad you found the humor, humorous. Just read your update for "Chasing a Dream," and it knocked me out. I need to reread and comment later, but for now baby needs me.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2011 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
You are a cruel cruel person and I don't like you. Why did I read this chapter? I knew I should have waited until a few more were posted before reading but I had hope they might escape. That hope was crushed like a bug without an exoskeleton. Now I have to wait. I hate wait!
Author's Response: Why, oh why Demona? I hope you really don't hate me and I hope you stick with the story. I promise you one thing, though. Tara won't die.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2011 - 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
Help!! I've got to know what happens next!!! Great story, turning into one of my favs of yours.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wish I could tell you more but he only thing I can guarantee is that Tara won't die.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2011 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 8
OH, NO.
Author's Response: I hope this doesn't put you off the rest of the story. Thanks for reading and commenting.
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2011 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter 8
Stupid commandos. I am not a fan of them, not that anyone is. Bit of a shame that they don't know that Veruca really did have it coming. So glad they have each other. Wonder what they initiative is planning with them, and if they will escape or be rescued. Want them out of there and back to their frenetic relationship. Update soon!
Author's Response: Their relationship will continue to develop in captivity. Thank you for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2011 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter 7
Love the push pull between Spike. And the Star Wars invitation was beyond brilliant, and perhaps the most random euphemism I've encountered in a while. I hope they are happy in their world of surround sound. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I assure you, they are very happy. I love Andrew.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2011 - 05:57 am Title: Chapter 8
I feel for Spike and Buffy being held captive by modern day mad scientists. At least Spike is allowed to join her. What have they done to Buffy? Bites nails!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2011 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
Got to say, really love the plot twist of both Buffy and Spike being captured! I also love that you didn't decide to have the Initiative put a chip in Spike's head. He's been already changing without one, and I've always thought they should have gone that way in canon as well. He didn't need the chip to change, he'd do it out of love because that's who Spike is. Ah well, good thing we have clever, awesome fanfic writers like you. ;) Really looking forward to more of this amazing story!
Author's Response: Thank you! You're way too nice to me.
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2011 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wonder how Spike and Buffy will get out?? Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting and reading!
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2011 - 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
I hate the initiative! They are such scum and so frustrating to read. This story definitely has me hooked. I love Buffy and Spike's interaction. I sure hope that they don't stay captured for long! And that Buffy kicks Riley & Forrest in the nuts.
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Author's Response: And by it I mean the story because clearly you do not like the Initiative or Riley and Forrest's nuts.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2011 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
Buffy and Spike.. prisoners.. hmm
enjoying..
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and commenting.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2011 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ooh, the tension between Buffy and Spike is electric! Can't wait to see it snap. ;) And yay for the Andrew appearance and funny 'bi-thoroughly explored' comments. *gg* The canon mention of Spike and Angelus getting it is another big tease Joss gave us. I wish they would have at least shown us some snogging flash back. ;)
I'm in love with this story and now I'm pouting like a spoiled child because there isn't another chapter for me to read. I'm really looking forward to another update, whenever you've got the time to post it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for all your sweet comments and for liking the "bi-thoroughly explored," joke. I think you and I are the only ones who think it's funny.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2011 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hee... Andrew! Am I right to hope for some Spike/Andrew interaction? Because that would be amazing. *g* Also, since I'm a big fan of dream sequences, I truly enjoyed Spike's dream. It felt very vivid. And I don't know if I've mentioned it before or not, but I love the Spike voice in this story!
Xander jealous of Giles? Loved it. ;) It's so funny that they see Giles as this old man when in fact he's really not that old. Personally, I don't find him attractive, but he's got that kind of charisma that would draw women in. Btw, all that talk of delicious food makes me hungry! Damn you. :D
Author's Response: I love Tom Lenk! I wish he could get his own sitcom or maybe a recurring character on 'Ringer,' or something. So pleased the dream worked for you.
I came to the series late, so Giles has always been appealing to me because I wasn't a teenager when I watched it. Hope you enjoy some delicious food!
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2011 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really like Dev. She feels real and believable and I'm glad Xander has someone who's really good for him and who encourages him to be more confident in himself. :) A truly lovely chapter! Now I'm curious to see what Spike does with the Du Lac book.
Author's Response: Glad you like Dav! All will be revealed with the du Lac book.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2011 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hee... the dialogue between Spike and Giles reminded me of Interview with a Vampire, except much better. ;) I really loved that bit about Rosie. Spike's been out and about for over a century and that leaves so much opportunities to fill that time frame. All one needs is a great imagination like yours to create moments f Spike's life we didn't get to see in canon. LOVED IT!
The interactions between all the characters are so much fun to read. It's really great that you're not bashing any of them, especially Xander, who's usually made out to be a bad guy in many fics. Not my cup of tea, which is why this story is so awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the back story for Spike. I've had that story in my head a long time and plugged it in here. Xander was never a bad guy to me, he was just a teenage boy who was trying to negotiate adulthood. I hate it when he gets bashed. Your comments have made me really happy, it was so kind of you to share them.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2011 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 3
What an interesting way to look at the whole blood thing. Loved the entire Buffy/Spike/Angel scene and how it truthfully showed their character. LOVING the story! ;)
Author's Response: You really know how to make a girl's day! Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you're enjoying this story as much as I'm enjoying yours.
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2011 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
You know, I don't really enjoy reading POV from characters other than Buffy and Spike, but I really liked the Xander part. :) Kudos to you for writing so well! That bit with Spike was heartbreaking, but it was so awesome that Buffy gave him a chance to fight on her side.
Author's Response: That's an amazing compliment, thank you!
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