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Date: 09/26/2011 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't think anyone could give you bad feedback. I was hooked from the very first paragraph. Loved this chapter A LOT!!! Loved that you gave the characters emotional depth and the dynamic between Spike and Buffy was amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means so much to me.

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Date: 09/26/2011 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter 7

LMAO at Eddie/Andrew

Author's Response: Awesome! Thank you!

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Date: 09/26/2011 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter 6

silly straws! love that Dru sees them in the future. amazing dream sequences in this story.

Author's Response: You're the first one that mentioned the silly straws, too. Glad I'm not the only one who thought it was funny. Thank you so much for the comment, and for digging the dream sequence.

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Date: 09/26/2011 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 5

omg, is that a Moloch reference that Willow made? so awesome

Author's Response: Yes, yes it is! You're the first one to catch it, too! Glad you're liking this one!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2011 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 7

Had to stop reading again to laugh, you are a comice genius. Even in your most series stories you have ways yo put in these smalls things that are just laugh out loud funny.
Hmm, Eddie. Wondering about him, but I'm a suspicious person.

Author's Response: It makes my day to know you laughed! I wrote the build up to that Star Wars punchline in a way I'd hope would make you suspicious of Eddie. It's not a spoiler to say don't be. He's just smitten with Andrew.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2011 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 7

Hopefully Spike won't try to get Dru back! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2011 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter 7

enjoyed

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2011 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2011 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 6

You know, the show never gave us any real Darla/Spike stories. they might have not been close but they traveled and live together for quite a bit of time. I love how you gave us what could be a cannon moment between those two.
Love how you worked in shy willow, and Giles cleaning his glasses. Just like the show, you do that so well.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the comment so much and am grateful for your continued interest in the story. I actually had a Darla/Spike story that was condensed down to this scene. I, too, wished there was more canon stuff with them. There was a little in the Spike vs. Dracula comic, so I'm building on that. Glad you like shy Willow, I feel like I'm neglecting her in this story a bit.

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Date: 09/24/2011 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter 6

Debasing a beef canoe? Does anyone have any idea what that means, and do we truly want to know? But all weird meat boats aside, great chapter. I love Dav and Xander and their warring insecurities. Such a real couple. And there have to be reasons for Spike to suddenly be dreaming what he is, and I am curious. Gotta wonder, too how things are going to go with the Avenolie chick. Maybe she's like Andrew Wells, too good to be true. So many possibilities. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't come up with the debased beef canoe, that was a mangled translation from the du Lac book in, "What's My Line." I had this funny idea that Giles, Dav and Spike had a conversation about it and that's what she's referring to here. Glad Dav and Xander feel like a real couple. That's a huge compliment. Spike's dream is a lot of how he feels about Buffy and it's foreshadowing, too. Buffy is being forced by Angel to be vulnerable before Spike and she doesn't like the fact one bit. He also fears Buffy is going to hurt him the way Darla did, make him completely helpless. There's a great deal of ambivalence. Hopefully you'll see the foreshadowing of what they say to each other during the dream panning out in a later scene. So glad you're reading and commenting!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2011 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 6

Please oh please let Andrew still possess his Spike!crush in this alternate universe (crosses fingers).

Author's Response: Oh, boy howdy, does he ever.

Author's Response: Oh, boy howdy, does he ever.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2011 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great update! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: claudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2011 - 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the direction of the story. Where do you come up with all these awesome lines from? The eclair joke made me fall out of my seat in the middle of the library.

Author's Response: Thank you! Where do I come up with my lines? I like to think it was my painfully awkward adolescence that caused me to respond to the rejection of my peers with humorous invective.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2011 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 5

This is simply a wonderful fic! I read all of it in one sitting and need more! And soon! Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awesome chapter! I was laughing so loud after reading this line: "The guy is a chocolate eclair and a hand job away from absolute evil." LOL!!!! Priceless!!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like that line, I thought it was funny.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 5

I love it. I love your grasp of the characters; you bring a fresh... playfulness? Tweek? Light to the dark? Anyway, hoozah! New chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think there's a lot of great stuff that's been written with the characters and it's hard to come up with a fresh approach. That's an amazing compliment!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

God, I adore this story (but then, I adore ALL of your stories). Dev is wonderful.

Author's Response: That's a wonderful thing to say. Glad you like Xander's girlfriend!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

Aww, sweet chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter 5

I love Dav. She and Xander are so cute, and I'm glad she's working to be part of their crazy. I hope that Spike finds what he's looking for, and that he can resolve his internal Buffy battle. Only a matter of time. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2011 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

Love that insight into Spike, love how Xander is already wraming up to him too.

Author's Response: Thank you! I read some fantastic stories by Mustang Sally that really delved into Spike as a character who's lived a long time that inspired me. He comes off as this glib young man for much of Buffy, but the character is actually very old. In fact, James Marsters was in his late thirties when he played Spike, and there's a great deal of depth hinted at in terms of life experience that kind of pays off more when Spike gets his soul. It's at that point his years seem to catch up with him. Sorry, that was a bit of a ramble. Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2011 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 3

"sandalwood, cannabis and just a hint bacon" For some reason that was just really funny to me, made me laugh out loud.

Author's Response: Glad you found that funny. That's how I always imagined Giles' house to smell when I'd watch the series.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2011 - 06:32 am Title: Chapter 4

Love how everyone seems to be forming a truce with Spike in their own way. Especially Xander. Just goes to show how much more likable the blond is when compared to the brunette. Pretty awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Xander and Spike bond a little more next chapter.

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2011 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter 4

Loved this. Especially Spike's bashful response to Buffy's invitation to patrol.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2011 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hopefully Angel doesn't become Angelus or Buffy will have real problems! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Can't speak to the Angelus thing, but I hope you like where the story goes. Thanks so much for the comment.

Reviewer: Demona423 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2011 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

Great story concept! You definitely got me hooked. I can't wait to find out what happens next. New chapter soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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