Date: 09/09/2012 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have loved ''Yours, William'' and I have loved as much ''My Elisabeth''. Those stories are the reason why i still continue after so many years to look for new stories. I know that somewhere there are some that are just wonderful and that I will read again and again. Thank you so much Puddinhead for those great stories. Take all the time you need but please come back eventually with a sequel of this tale.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Pierrie. I learned a lot writing this story - a lot of mistakes that I can't help but wince when I see them. But it's so nice to know that you enjoyed it.
Date: 05/01/2012 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Your story is outstanding! I enjoyed the adjoining piece and this is a great sequel. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Nana. Nice to hear from you
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2012 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This version of Buffy is just the best. So Buffy-like and delightful. It's just like her to buy an ice-cream for the ship's employee George. Always a rebel not concerned with what's 'supposed to be done'. Love it! :)
Author's Response: Glad you like her. She has plenty more impolite moments ahead :) As an American in the UK I always felt like I didn't know ANY of the rules for how to behave in public :)
Date: 03/12/2012 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
love the story but i am the only one to feel like his cheating on his wife?i don't know if it's my french point of view but she's ten years old younger albeit not at all the same please tell me she's gonna recover her memory i miss Elizabeth!!!(have little enough of ungrateful and undecisive buffy)but i admit I LOVE YOUR STORIES please give us more!!!
Author's Response: Eve, I'm really glad you said something about that and I'm glad that you feel protective about "Elizabeth". I do think that (to William) she is the same woman, just younger.
The issue of her recovering her memories is a sticky one and I can't give away any spoilers.! Thanks so much for the feedback
Date: 01/16/2012 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Not to belabor something that should probably just be dropped, but beta readers are special people. They take time out of their day to read someone else's story - to try and find and correct errors, and offer suggestions to improve the story line. They do not get paid. They are not professional proof-readers and they are not proof-reading Macbeth ... This is FANFIC people ... deal with it. The point is to have fun, to get lost in the story and not worry about if the word should be lay, lie, or laid or if there should be a comma or a semi-colon in that particular spot. I think having any *police* of any kind involved is just wrong in this context. I would, however, love to read some stories of yours, Grammar Police ... please post a link to them. I'm sure we'd all be interested in checking them out and getting lost in the fun...
Author's Response: Thanks P4S. For the record, if you ever see this kind of crap going down in someone else's reviews, PLEASE let me know, will ya?
Date: 01/15/2012 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Woo! Fight, fight, fight! Haha! I knew we picked a good one here, didn't we Riley? Riley? Damn it, where is he now? Must be off on one of his recreational drives or judging a corn eating contest or something. Honestly, it's so hard to find good help these days.
Oh and Grammar police, don't worry. I am in no way affiliated with Miss Defensive over there. Check the members list, I'm authentic, that anonymous crap is so tacky, even for bad guys....uh right. Anyway yeah! Fight!
I know right? These people will let anyone join.
Author's Response: I would say "really not helping Warren" at this juncture but...that IS your nature! :D And dammit, I love you for it.
I say again, your epic poem awaits!
[Report This]Date: 12/26/2011 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to apologize for the typos in my reviews ... they are beta-less. Hope you can decipher them ... :P
Author's Response: I don't see typos unless I'm beta'ing (and then I only see half of them!)
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2011 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 1
A very happy, feel good chapter, up until the creature was loaded onto the ship ... Now, what will Buffy do without her Slayer strength when faced with a demon?
Author's Response: Sorry so late with responding to reviews. House full of Christmas family!
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2011 - 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG I'm so glad I found this! :-) I had just stayed up the previous night till three in the morning reading Yours, William. So good. Just started reading this wonderful sequel your writings a
amazing. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! Your comment about stayin up until 3 am thrilled me! (Is that wrong?) This was lovely to hear - thanks so much for the feedback!
Date: 09/24/2011 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Our followers are many. Watch as Fox News spreads its completely impartial and honest reports to the nation and brings about our victory! Fear not, Tractor, soon your song will be played on every radio station in the country and all shall understand the allure of your sexy farmer driven selves! No one can resist the Kardashians! Warren! Get back to work!
Author's Response: We will stop you PTWB. Because you have unleashed the Jedward on us (don't even TRY to deny it) and for that, we will never back down, never surrender.
Date: 09/23/2011 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Did people only focus on your Fox News joke and completely forget that freaking Warren! has just graced Buffy with his creepy presence? I haven't read any stories recently where people have tried to bring him back in any capacity, so I definitely didn't see that coming. I'll be eagerly waiting for your next update!
Author's Response: I love writing Warren (is that wrong?) The way he views women is so bizarre and I love the fact that he can read your mind because that is so violating and Warrenlike :) THanks for the review and I'm glad it surprised you! (The twist, not Fox News)
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2011 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hey! Glad you're along for this trip as well
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2011 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm so excited to see this sequel! I read Yours, William on EF and loved it, especially the Victorian context. The Spuffy is so sweet here, and the ship setting so cool.
Author's Response: Good to hear that. Things will be bumpy, I won't lie but..,worthwhile, I hope. Thanks for the review
Date: 09/15/2011 - 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
You wrote a sequel!! Je t'adore!! :D 'Yours, William' is one of the best fics I've read in a long time, and you made it even better by writing a sequel! I love the first chapter, and I'm so impacient waiting for the next one! You are so awesome, thank you!
Author's Response: Eddam, I'm overwhelmed. Thank you SO MUCH! I had to let this story kind of marinate for a couple of months. Once it started to form, I couldn't wait to start telling it. Hope you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 09/15/2011 - 04:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Such a wonderful 1st chapter showing their new adventure, of course the box of horrors in the ship's hold can never be good news. Elizabeth doesn't have her slaying powers, so short of making a weapon out of what is available on the unsuspecting ship, they are both on the menu! Look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review vette. It's wise to be worried about the creature in the box !
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2011 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congratulation to your Grand Opening of this story, my dear.
Love the memory parcels, what a lovely image. And don't forget to give us the test results (including the test description) of the bed!
Author's Response: What a surprise to see you here!
For complete and thorough test results, you may have to wait. Ropes may or may not be involved for complete and thorough testing.
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2011 - 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a most pleasant surprise! I am so glad to see bits of this world continued, even if we don't get to dump pudding on anyone's head, it really is awesome to see them living life, even if it may get a bit challenging. Stupid evil creatures in the cargo hold that are not sexy bleached vampires... Wonderful. Update soon!
Author's Response: I will neither confirm nor deny the possibilities of using weaponized food in this tale. Now that you've given me the idea...it will be all your fault if it happens. And it's really nice to see you again BuffyRat :)
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2011 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay you continued! I loved Yours William and now I get a sequel. You have just made my day!
Author's Response: Santhy, you are very kind. Thanks so much for that! Made me smile very big here
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2011 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful start! I love your descriptions of the ship and the era. And Buffy's forays into 21st century lingo - that's priceless. This is so well written that it boggles my mind. Let's have some more, shall we (cringes at the thought of the darkness though).
Author's Response: I barely made it through a modern England, so I really do feel for Buffy trying to make her way through a Victorian version. So glad you like the descriptions. The ships and train travel were really interesting to research! Hopefully they'll be interesting to you all too
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