Reviews For My Elizabeth
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Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2013 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 15

I know it's just how Buffy is, and you're writing her fantasiclly, but her always being the emotionally distant fruit loop that she is makes me want to strangle her! I like how you touched on the "I'm cookie dough" thing! It's true that her being fully baked is the complete woman, but it's sad even William knows he had her and this Buffy is not there yet. :( Everytime I tell myself "just one more chalter, then I'm going to go be productive today." you suck me with with these little cliffhangers. Dru is outside their room?! Looks like I will be reading on!

Author's Response: Thanks. Your reviews are really thoughtful and its helpful to know what works in a chapter. I appreciate your feedback so much

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2012 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter 15

The scene with William so boldly undressing in front of Buffy was deliciously visual. Thank you for that. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: sabs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter 15

ARGH Cliffhanger!! Is it Dru? Is it another hysterical woman in need of electrical intervention? Can't wait for the next installment to find out.

Author's Response: I want an all female band called "Electrical Intervention". Will you play bass?

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 06:04 am Title: Chapter 15

Such an evil cliff hanger following such an awkward day for them. Of course Dru would make it out of the hold, and of course it had to happen right as they were having a really good sharing opportunity. The kind of sharing opportunity that could have lead to naked fun. Not that they are yet ready for naked fun, but I would love for them to be awkwardly ready for some. :) Progress is indeed slow, but precious nonetheless. William as the water to her granite, and what shall happen when they land. They must stay together, they just must! I'm even more caught up in this story than usual. Just finished Yours, William (again!) and I just want to see those two crazy kids with a little bit of happiness. Thank you for keeping this story here. Update soon!

Author's Response: They are working through the things that people have to work through to come together but DAMN Buffy does have her some walls. In the last story she was so --- done with the war. So she could be a woman. This earlier version of her is so caught up in duty and so wary of men (post Riley, Angel and Parker) that she's a human cactus :( But Elizabeth has given our boy a pair of stones and some self confidence. He may surprise her :)

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 15

Oh ... evil muses, they are to be the death of us! Buffy was just starting to open up a litlte. Someone needs to kick Dru's skinny ass ... What the heck is cottled cream, anyway? I'll have to look that up. Wouldn't have minded a peek into that afternoon tea/fashion show they had before they left London...heehee! Look forward to more! -

Author's Response: Plus, frankly, "clotted cream" just sounds as appealing as "bleach". Ah well! Those wacky brits and their steak and kidney pie and spotted dick!

Reviewer: Inara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 15

No! William No! Don't get hurt!!!! Arg!!! Must Update IMMEDIATELY.

I love this bold side of William - the quiet fortitude that you have created for his character is wonderful. Would mind terribly wrapping him up in a bow and sending him to me?? *Pretty please!*

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: This whole chapter came out on Friday! I didn't expect it at all (and I will never understand this process). Then I worked on fixing and polishing over the weekend. The next chapter is a lot of action and a whole lot of thinking about motivations (What's more important to William at this moment? What's most important to Buffy?) and then BAM a new thing comes along and I have to think it through for them again. IT's interesting. I *WILL* loan you William but he's ... errr... busy with me right now. Soon tho Inara! Soon!

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