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Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2013 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 17

Aww. I'm so glad you dedicated an entire chapter to George's funeral! He deserved it. I am so sad that he is gone, but I loved how caring the rest of the ships passengers were. They attended his funeral and even raised money for his family! Perfect. I love your history bits at the end! They are fascinating and fun to read!

Author's Response: Thanks. Now that I'm writing a book to try to publish, I can't write those and I miss them! Wish published books had footnotes in every chapter! I'd abuse the hell out of that

Reviewer: aly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2012 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter 17

Meh you made me cry ,i hate you :p
Just kidding of course. Sad for poor George, will miss him. You did a great job on creating him!
Loving the story, all historical details really enhance the tale you are telling :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Aly. I really adored George and wept when I wrote it. It means so much that you liked him as a character.

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2012 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 17

I loved this chapter, even though it made my cry. Maybe because of that. I must be a masochist!

Author's Response: Thanks. It's been a rough week - that was nice to hear

Reviewer: Lily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2012 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter 17

I felt so sad reading about George's service. You created a somber mood that touched my feelings deeply. Poor George! You will be missed.

Author's Response: I'm honored that you cared so much about George. It means a lot to an author. Thanks so much for taking the time to write a note about that!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2012 - 09:31 am Title: Chapter 17

A fitting farewell for George, as sad as the whole situation is, to leave him off to his next adventure, Davy Jones and all, seems the right thing. That Captain Parsell is a wonderful man, to take William's opinion in such high regard. Hopefully, this tragedy will help to bond our blond pain, and give them a mission to attend to when they reach land. Love all your historical detail, too. And there is nothing wrong with being creepily morbid. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: We will have to start a Creepily Morbid Club! What was fun about Capt. Parsell is that when the story formed in my head, he was barely there and a kind of stereotypical sea captain. But when I found the boat for them, and researched who captained it, he just popped out. His crew adored him and he had a kind word for everyone. Always nice to have you along for the ride BR!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2012 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 17

I love the part about making up one whole useful person. It's a very Joss Whedon type of scene, beautiful and well-executed. The historical details make this piece really sing.

Author's Response: Thanks hon. Now to start on this next chappie. Yikes! Thanks again for all your help and insight!

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2012 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 17

Oh tears ... glorious angst and tears. Wonderful chapter. Loved it.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. It was sad to put George to rest. Was proud of our Willie tho!

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