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Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2013 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 19

William is just the best man ever. Personally, I think he should forget about Buffy and find a girl who already loves him... gee, come to think of it I'm available.... Puddinhead, would you pass that along to William for me? Thanks! ;)

Author's Response: Sure, I'll tell him - just as soon as I'm finished with him...

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2012 - 02:50 am Title: Chapter 19

I'm positively giddy at the prospect of William's wooing of Buffy. :D And he's being very, very smart about it too. Aaah, I'm enjoying this SO much!

Author's Response: I kind of wanted him to just dive right in,, ya know? But I couldn't have William repeating Spike's mistakes.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2012 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 19

Impressive composure on our dear sweet William to wait. Certainly made a good point, and I don't imagine she stands a chance at resisting his wooing. The tale of how they came to be is pretty impressive as it is. ;) Can't wait to see how goes their second date. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks BuffyRat. I have a list of stuff they're going to do in NYC so an update shouldn't take too long. Problem is, some of it requires a lot of background knowledge. So research mode is on for a bit. Hopefully writing again soon. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Inara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2012 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 19

Okay... You're a tease!! As per my last note to you, and your response, are you sure you're just 99% evil?? Cuz Alternative C? Really? *giggles*

Despite your inherent evilness, I adored William's "I should like very much for an opportunity to woo you." Also, his metaphor about fishing was great. Even though I wanted some serious smoochies to ensue, I was delighted with the turn of events. Buffy even sat in his lap! It was perfect - exactly what I imagine William would have done and glad that they didn't fall into the trap of sex for comfort, rather than love. Great work. I just love this story!!!! Thank you so much. I can't wait for more wooing!

As a sidebar, poor Spike. No matter what universe he's in, he still is trying to make that woman fall in love with him! Although, technically this version doesn't remember that, it still majorly sucks for him in a larger cosmic kinda way. Thanks again!

Author's Response: THanks inara! I have hopes the wooing won't take too long as Buffy is already pretty far along to being smitten with him. She just works so hard at denial. If William can just help her shed a bit of baggage, I think the smuttiness, I mean "soulful lovemaking" can follow. I agree about Spike's karma - however, sometimes when you work for something, you cherish it more. At least that what my parents told me when they wouldn't help me with college. I'm sticking with that!

Reviewer: minxy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2012 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 19

Okay, I read it again. And teared up again. This chapter made me want to re-read, "Yours, William," again.

Author's Response: You're sweet Minx. I don't deserve you

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2012 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 19

Oh, swoon! I love William! You did a wonderful job of mixing misty eyes with giggles here and Buffy being avoidy ... wow, who woulda seen that coming!? heehee! Seriously, excellent. More please!

Author's Response: Thanks p4s. I couldn't do a season 6 redux. And I don't think wooing will take all that long since she's halfway gone already. She just doesn't know it

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