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Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2013 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 21

What a nice chapter! I like hearing Buffy is cuddling with William at night and she is completely aware and fine with it! They seem well on their way to being happy once again, which makes me wonder how soon your going to bring in the bad to muck things up! Oh yes, I've caught on to your conspiring ways! ;)

Author's Response: What? Me? MOI? I am affronted! ;)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2012 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter 21

I feel like I'm learning a lot about that era and that I can actually trust the historical bits you write because you've done your research. I've got to say, this is the most fun I've ever had while learning anything. :D I'm really enjoying the whole courting process and the UST!

Also, absolutely loved Buffy barging in to the barber's shop to protect William's curls. And... Mount Erection. *gg* I'm in love with your brilliant, cheeky mind and can't wait to see whether William will agree to a game of 'strip poker'. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I do worry that I go on and on too much about the details. It's a hard line to walk. I'm glad you liked the barbershop thing. I almost cut that bit out.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 21

Strip poker... mmmm... :) I just hear Homer Simpson saying that. And I fear that poor William's erection may make a tour de force reappearance. Whatever will he do with drunk and naked Buffy? Poor guy. And when will she fall for him? And what is Dru up to? Many more questions. Already looking forward to the next update. Good look with your paper!

Author's Response: You never know ... who will be naked? Who is more willing to cheat? Who wants to win or lose? You are right! Damn, I had no idea how many questions there were! Dru is ... busy. I have given a lot of thought to that today. No spoilers!

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 21

Oh, poor William. First havng to endure the lotion torture, then Buffy being upset by the play. Thank goodness she didn't let them cut off his curls! That would've been a travesty! Strip poker, huh? I wonder how much of Spike's poker skills William had already? heehee! And Buffy drunk while playing, that should tip the odds. Me thinks William may need that sheet to bunch around his hips again very soon. Lovely update, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: A confession: I wrote it that he'd gotten a haircut the first time around. I ended up ... not liking that! Thanks for your feedback. I hope the poker surprises you in a good way

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2012 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 21

"His morning erection pounced on this information..."

BWWAAHAHAHAHAAH!!!!!!

Author's Response: An erection pounce, in the right circumstances, can be quite wonderful

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