Reviews For My Elizabeth
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Reviewer: Hostile17 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2013 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh Buffy... Mad at William for not taking advantage? Silly girl! Then mad at herself for throwing herself at him. Then upset because she thinks he deserves better. Yet, as always William remains the best guy ever and comforts her through her emotional rollercoaster.

Author's Response: I wanted him to cheat at cards because it is such a Spike thing to do - but I wanted him to do it in a William way. Thus, cheating to lose was born! I used to cheat my ass off to lose at Candyland when playing with little kids :)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2012 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 22

William is the best husband/sweetest man ever! I love how Buffy's mood swings don't make him love her any less and how he keeps a calm head even though he must miss being with someone who remembers loving him. I love this version of him so much! Both him and Buffy. :)

Author's Response: I saw him as carrying 'them" through these chapters. He carried all of who Elizabeth was, all the memories of what they were - and he was so lonely through it. I think this kind of bravery often goes unnoticed. Thanks, as always, for your comments

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2012 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter 22

Darn morally upstanding William. It was probably the right thing, but it would have been fun if they went for it. Each little step they take will hopefully will get them closer to falling over the edge. It feels like she's nearly there, and I eagerly look forward to their adventure west. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: I think they are closer to the edge than they may realize! Then westward ho! In which I promise I will surprise you with something!! (Sorry I'm a geek and very excited about this one surprise!!!)

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2012 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter 22

Obviously, Spike got more skilled at cheating at cards over the century of unlife! heehee! Very sweet ending of course, I do hope Buffy will let the walls down and give herself a chance ... as well as William.

Author's Response: I don't think this can go on for much longer! Plus, their (train) carriage awaits!

Reviewer: Inara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2012 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 22

Naughty William! So, what was his plan... get ridiculously naked and then...? I understand his motivations for not wanting her to be wearing her birthday suit, but what about him wearing his? He didn't think she might jump him since she was the one who started strip poker??

I LOVED the fact that Buffy said 'Night, Love'. Made me do the snoopy dance. Thanks so much for the update. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Inara, I think William was in a blind panic, trying to be gallant and stop her from undressing and hadn't really planned ahead! And I LOVE that you wanted to snoopy dance! I was happy (and surprised) that Buffy let that slip, for real!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2012 - 03:56 am Title: Chapter 22

Man, this chapter brought it. I was teary near the end. You hit the perfect melancholy, funny tone.

Author's Response: Well, I got no words, seriously. Love you Minxy

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2012 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter 22

Huge complaint: This chapter was not nearly long enough.

Author's Response: The next one is already longer! See how easy that is?

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